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got it. you´ve meant goten. he´s "untitled"....wow.

So I've been sitting here for the past.. 15 minutes trying to think of a review.

I dunno what to say.

The only thing I would 'critique' is that you should put death fic somewhere, and you should title it Mind Fuck.

Because at the end, everyone knows how fucked Goten was.. but him. Everyone knows this deep dark secret about who is was/is, but no one is speaking about it. its.. it's just such a mind fuck!

Oh man that was intense! Very angsty but I loved it! I like how Goku got to start over with his son and just that one bit of understanding helped them bond as a family again. It was definitely a mind fuck and I felt so bad for poor Goten. I also missed Gohan! Oh and this was my favorite line, "I fly off to go home but not before screaming to Trunks to fuck himself. He opens his window and throws his television at me. I catch it and fly home. We don’t have one of these at home." I like how you can mix humor and angst. Good job!

What an amazing angst! So dark and with a beautiful ending, just the way I like it. And here I thought Buffy had the best angst out there, you came out with this; the descriptions of pain, the depth of emotions, I was frightened all the way that it'd turn out like Put Out at the end, thank god it didn't! Kudos to you!

just amazing! ...wow i dont know what to say. it was really...heart attacking, you know?
gods i really believed until the end goten will have a happy end, but what you did than was
much more interesting and just amazing!!! in the mittle of the story i almost hate goku... what´s really weird, because i love him no matter how he is described in a fanfiction. evil, mad, uke seme whateverguy, it doesnt matter to me.
but in this story, i think you make me MUCH more care about goten and
i cant prevend, not to feel with him. it was so unbelievable sad,
how he hurt himself so bad, in that way of endless selfdestruction.
and as i said, the end was ...well, just amazing! very sensitive. very intelligent. very awesome. oh and i was &%$§"§$ relieved, that it didnt end a few lines before...
god. ^^ really. i was. thank you!

:)

...I have no words, really. Great work.

That was easily the sweetest, fluffiest story of incest, insanity, alcoholism, self-mutilation, drug use, vomiting, violence, and obsession that I've read in a long time.

I was entertained.

Oh god, that was angsty! Really good writing though. I was so disgusted and sad by the way Goten's life turned out (first), the dragonballs are such a blessing :)
And by the way, I wouldn't mind you continuing your lemons, them being about the best ever ;3