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September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update this
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July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great starter! Please continue!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!! you just made both of us spit on our keyboards (i had tea Affie had chai) and the noise thru the speakerphone not only freaked out my cats but hers as well... oh please continute it i need the laughter now i haave to go the alchahol and q-tips and get the sweet tea out of my keyboaard before the sticking keys re perminaaaant
Rysha and Affie
{we share an account so take turns on the reviews :)}
Rysha and Affie
{we share an account so take turns on the reviews :)}
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice one! I'd love to read more of this!!
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was damn helarious and not to mention entertaining! Please, continue and update soon!
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the rest of this story. One of my favorite parts was when The Flame Alchemist gets all pissed of then he calms down lol. That would remind me of Ed sometimes. Can't wait for the next part!
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, sounds like it'll be very cute. (hopefully that's what you're aiming for) Ah, 1/3 of the way down, colonels should be colonel's, and 2/3 down, damn should be dam. Other wise, nothing stands out. I hope you continue it, even if just for me.
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February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far this sounds fun. I would like to read more. Please do continue. :)