rate_review Reviews

arghness! Situation like these make me wanna punch a person for not realizing they'll be hurt far worse than the beginning! =[[
This made me wanna punch Ed in the face xD

it's good though

~Eica it developed quite well for one chappy

You know this brought tears to my eyes, but is it really over? It feels still unfinished to me. Something needs to be resolved between Ed and Al, because just as much as Al loves Ed, I think Ed loves Al too. He wouldn't have gone through so much for him if he didn't feel that way.

Poor alfons....oops i mean Al. Very sad. And really hot! Good job!

*whaps Ed* Jerk. Anyway, very nice, nee-chan. You did a much better job with that prompt than I could've, so you get a cookie! *forcefeeds moldy chocolate-chip* ^^ Now, go work on Cleaning Up, damn you!

Hey! Great job! Just one thing though. To critique your German, you would not use "Sie" for a loved on in German, you would actually use either "du" or "dich" depending on the context. i.e. I love you is "Ich liebe dich" rather than "ich liebe sie" and I hate you is "Ich hasse dich". It's not a big deal, and not many people would notice it, but I speak German and it kind of bugged me. lol. Anyway, It's a great story! Sehr sehr gut! Es war toll!