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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.^_^
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally a new chapter, which was great btw, I really liked it! So this mysterious guy that Father works with, is from the onther side of the Gate; I presume, huh?! Scary, I wonder who it is?!
So what's going to happen now? Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
So what's going to happen now? Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a very interesting story, not to mention getting intensive byt eh mintue you read it. i have to say a very good story, so please keep uo the good work! hope to see further update soon T_T
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this! Do you have an email alert list. If so could you add me to it please! I can't wait for more of this story.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting fic, hope to see more soon!
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! My guess is Shau (sp?) Tucker.
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shit, this "Father" and the other guy sound pretty damn creepy and their plan, whatever it's about, sounds pretty damn nasty as well!
And Roy has also been taken, huh, not good!
Just a question; could you perhaps write longer chapters, please?!
I totally loved the last scene; so cute!
Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
And Roy has also been taken, huh, not good!
Just a question; could you perhaps write longer chapters, please?!
I totally loved the last scene; so cute!
Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..they're protecting him...but how long will it last?
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, so what's really going on here? Forgive me but sometimes I can be a little "slow" on catching up on this things, or maybe not, hehe! What I mean is; what is the plan about, cuz I sure as hell can't see all that's happening?! But this I got so far; Envy and Lust wants to protect Ed, but the question is; why?
Just a tip, you might want to re-read the chapter before posting it in the near future, coz you'd some typos and such!
Anyway, cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
Just a tip, you might want to re-read the chapter before posting it in the near future, coz you'd some typos and such!
Anyway, cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...
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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, so this is the sequel of the Kawaii Bean, huh?! Okay, if it is, it's good, I'll most definitely want to read more, so please update soon...