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for Wishes of the Fallen

by SaiyanGirl

schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting turn of story, I started to worry about trunks. Chichi died naturally and vegeta really missed kakarotto.will you bring him back? the universe most glory warriors.
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha I love your take on Vegeta's and Bulma's relationship ^__^
And wow Chichi can't control herself ... haha what a bitch
loving your fic ^__^
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha Goten has a crush on Vegeta ... I hope he makes some kind of move ... and I do hope Vegeat doesn't kill him for it ...
person MewMew2
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've done an excellent job on your research of the human brain and the diagnosis of Chichi's cause of death. Thank you so much for finding the time to update this story.
person fayjay19
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
thank you i am so happy bulma found out goku didn't kill his chichi, so does this mean goku isn't dead, did he go somewhere else using his IT. and it was energy that was release that destroy the area and what about that morning what was goin on with goku and y is vegeta freak out about the new moves. i have so many questions,please email me back.
person Bluesake
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome! Was waiting for the update!~ :D Keep em coming. I see some hints of vegeta/goten XD hope goku comes back somehow. Good chapter
person Bluesake
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was ill...vegeta's speech had me in complete shock. I was caught between jumping up and screaming "tell them geta!" to those are some seriously powerful words. I was taken back. I can't wait for the next chapter I hope goku really isn't dead. xD
person Kurok
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Writing, finally something different! Beautiful and angsty to the core. I hope you keep writing!
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GOD THIS IS AMAZINGLY BREATH-TAKING!!!! PLEASE UPDATE....

VEGETA IS GRIEVING SO MISERABLY THE LOSS OF HIS RIVAL, AND WELL... GOTEN'S THE ONLY THING LEFT OF HIM... SINCE GOHAN IS SUCH A JERK!!! WELL I LOVE THIS BECAUSE I JUST CAN'T IMAGINE WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!! I JUST HOPE VEGETA AND GOKU GET TOGETHER SOO... SOMEHOW... (0.o)

i don't see how that happens but i am willing to wait for you to update and share with us mortal people your writing gifted skills!!!

THIS FIC ROCKS!!!! I <3 your fic!!!
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I have never seen it from Chichi's point of view like that. The start is
very enticing, I want to know more! I love it!

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