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great story , please update!!!

You're off to a good start with this chapter. Not with Goku, but with Chichi. Sets up things well here.

Finally, someone told Gohan what a dissapointment he was. That not the only thing I like about these last few chapters. I really like the fact that nobody here in the story is ashamed of their Saiyan heritage and trying to hide it. I often got the sense in many fanfictions where the Saiyans were 'domesticated' and 'nicely settling down' with wives like they showed in GT. That runs counter to what Vegeta's nature was originally portrayed as in the anime/manga. It's refreshing to see Vegeta portrayed bringing Saiyan Pride alive in Goten, and having him in turn emulating Vegeta. The connection between them makes so much sense. Now that Goku's gone Vegeta's the one that he would look to for guidance. And Vegeta's saiyan pride is so refreshing to see in this story I'm sad others haven't written it in theirs. A very kickass refreshing change of pace here.

I love the bad ass Goten. Excellent job on this chapter. Thanks you so much for updating once more, I can't wait for the next one!

Oh I love how Saiyan Goten is becoming, about time that he realized how pathetic humans are compared to him.

But where is Goku? Can he be revived? What is Vegeta doing? Please post more.

What an emotional chapter.

I loved how you told it through Vegeta's POV, his disgust at them all, the realization that Goten was more Saiyan than he thought, and his growing protectiveness of him. Just wonderful.

I'm hoping Vegeta takes him under his wing now but also hoping that Goku can come back and be with Vegeta somehow.

OMG!!! please please please update again soon! this is amasing! will Goku come back? arrgh! must.read.more.! wonderful story

I loved your latest update! Oh how I enjoyed a classic, primal vegeta just letting it all hang out. Excellent job, please update ASAC!

How intense was that! Wonderfully written.

Typical that Goku's friends turned on Vegeta and wouldn't believe him. I thought Vegeta was almost back to his planet purging self for a moment there, and I don't blame him with how they were behaving. Krillen wouldn't give him a chance and got what he deserved.

So proud of Goten, behaving more Saiyan than Human and standing up for Vegeta. There's hope for him. Bet no-one apologises to Vegeta though.

Where's Goku? He can't be really gone can he? Noooo! Quick someone get the dragonball radar.

That was brilliant! All I can say right now is wow..........