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Thanks for giving the readers a glimpse of Vegeta's home life. I liked the segment about trunks becoming more 'human.' Very amusing. Please update when you can!

Bah! I'd forgotten that I'd read this chapter too! But, I certainly didn't mind reading it again ^.^ ChiChi's behavior certainly leaves you wondering what is going on with her, and the emotions that passed through both her and Goku during their arguement were so realistic and believable. Wonderful job!

Wouh O_O I seriously love this fic of yours, you write so detailed way... And of course subject kicks ass! I'm so glad you just wrote new chapter, I am waiting forward the next one :3 Keep it on!

Whoa. Very, very intense. I didn't see this coming at all. Interesting start for a story, I'm curious as to how it will progress!

Whoa! It's almost like ChiChi has a tumor or something!
Great job with Chapter 5! Very smooth transition from a relatively calm and happy start to chaos. It almost leaves your spinning.

Really awesome story so far. Keep up the good work!

So much drama in this chapter.

First it started off easy and I was enjoying Goku's thoughts on his connection to wildlife, Earth, friends, and family giving him strength. His description of Saiyans fighting styles, not wanting to be like them, and his admiration and eventually gratitude to Vegeta for showing him his heritage.

Then the whirlwind started and I found myself feeling sorry for Chichi, which is definitely a first for me. What on earth could be wrong with her, sounds a bit like possession or schizophrenia, but at the end Goku seemed possessed too or was it his Kakarot side taking over?

Oh I'm so intrigued by this and can't wait for more.

This fic has definitely caught my complete attention. I like how you went deeper into the personality traits of the characters and expanded upon them so they were much more complex than those portrayed in the series. Excellent job! Please update as soon as you can.

Damn this is good. The level of detail and description, not to mention your grasp of the characters speaks of someone who is writing an original piece...a published original piece, and not fanfiction.

I would seriously recommend you consider publishing an original work. You're good enough that I'd pay to read your stuff.

Wee! I read this story at 'The Saiyajin HideAway', and even e-mailed my compliments to you, so I'm thrilled to see that you decided to post it here as well ^.^ I'd already read up until this point, so I'm really excited about the next chapter!

Keep up the fantastic work! Your writing skills are excellent and the flow is perfect!

That was very well written and intriguing. Your detailed descriptions paint a perfect picture in my minds eye.

I wonder what is wrong with Chichi, sounds like an illness but she is having nightmares too. Do they tie in to what is happening to her husband?

The interaction between Goku and Vegeta was totally in character, and I'm itching to find out what the visions Vegeta saw meant, why Goku can't remember what he did, and why the pose and techniques are affecting the both of them so much.

Please update soon.
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