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for His Life

by YamiKuro

person hikaru9
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You wrote my OTP. I love you. <3 I only wish it was longer and you went into Gracia and Elysia's deaths, as well as Ed pulling Maes out of his grief. You only make me want more. T_T <3
person Hikaru9
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah, it cut off part of my review!

But yeah, i only wish that this had been longer. I would have loved to see you get into the deaths of Gracia and Elysia, and shown us how Ed reached out to Maes and they became lovers. You made me all curious! T_T
person radcat
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet...is this a one shot or will there be more? Poor Hughes...Gracia and Elysia are gone. That would have really killed him. You think it would have been Roy to pull him out but it is sweet that is was Ed. I can see Ed doing that.

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