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by Chuquita

person Zofo
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so funny when Vegeta and Goku were talking about the mattress and whether it was quiet enough when they were discussing 'boundaries', and the line later when Goku asked to be Vegeta's ass-sistant made me spit my wine out :)

Loved Vegeta taking command and firing the actors, also his use of the megaphone and the effect on Piccolo's ears. But what sort of fancy under-garments was he on about, does Goku make him wear them when they discuss 'boundaries'?

Raditz trying to play Nappa left me gasping, I could just picture it! The whole 'rabbit from a hat' bit with his hair was a hoot.

The ending was sooo cute! Goku calling Vegeta Veggie all the time, and offering to stay with him. Awww, makes me want to hug him :)

I am slightly confused though. You keep mentioning getting back to the main storyline as if this is a diversion from another story of yours. Which story do you mean?
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The biggest chocolate chip cookie of all time? Ooooh I wanna see too *shoves Goten out of the way* Lol. And Turles making cookies? XDXDXD Nuff said. ChiChi dying by getting crushed by a rock? HAHAHA. WTF. And the fact that Goku kept calling him "Veggie" had me rolling. Seriously. I don't know why but that was funny. Also the random use of "Por que" somewhere in there. XDXDXD

I love humorous stories. You never see enough of them. It's all about porn and angst on this site :D

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