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I know it's been years and you might not see this but your writing style is so damn lovely!! I originally found you from your g/gh fics and was surprised to find out you wrote this one too. I love the stuff you write so much, the interactions are incredibly in character!~ thanks for providing these rare pairs with such high quality fanfics man <3 

i should've known i would like this story as soon as i read your name ^^ every story you write is a treat! thank you for sharing :D

Hey Macha! 

So glad I found you on here! Even after all this time, I want you to know I STILL love this fic. Love. Love Gohan and his neediness, Vegeta's strength and control and lust, and of course the tons of Hot Sex! 

If you're not on Tumblr you should be! That's where I found the rec for this and wasn't disappointed. I especially appreciated the little signs of emotion here and there, which WAY too many fics lack. I really hate when it's like "ok let's fuck, cool, see ya later." VERY hot and for pity's sake write a sequel! (Please?) I would love to know where they go from there!! <333

(Now I see a possible reason why so few readers bother leaving reviews here, it's like passing through the Mexican border control just to read one. The captcha filters have improved, however.) I'd read this story some time ago elsewhere, in fact it was this one that got me intrigued by this pairing. In general I prefer Vegeta with Goten, but I'm open-minded on pairing ideas & this one is interesting. I like stories that break the mold. They do have a minimum of a history, which shows up well here, (I love his Saiyaman fantasy!) & I definitely like Gohan's maso side that complements Vegeta's personality well. Being drunk is a nice touch as otherwise he may not have dared to make the first move. The scene was definitely hot & well depicted, I just wonder how they managed to let a year pass. IDK if you've considered this or have done so, but it would be really cool to see another story from you with Gohan as seme, maybe as a sequel to this one? If you do (or if there even is a sequel), do let me know because I would definitely read it! Anyway, great job!

Oh what perfection of a plot fic! Adored how hungry and completely strong saiyan like the rythm of this fic accompanied the hard personalities of the characters. Adored, adored adoreeed.

I found a rec for this on the Tumblr fanfic blog. While it isn't my favorite pairing, the story was very well written and the imagery was very nice. The characters are well depicted and the pacing was good. I would recommend it. Great job!

Wow! Thank you, that was really awesome! Mhhmmm Vegeta...

Hey, wow....what a night LOL. I really liked the ending but I felt sorry and a bit like....why? Did Videl find out about Gohan's night with Vegeta? Why would she divorce Gohan? I guess you leave that to the readers imagination. Great story!

I have to be honest. As much as I despise adult Gohan, I loved this ficlet. You have some really good writing skills. I'm not a fan at ALL of this pairing, but I read it all and enjoyed it wholeheartedly, didn't I? That's proof you're an awesome writer!

The only bad thing I have to say is something that threw me off and kind of made me roll my eyes. At one point Vegeta tells Gohan to say something in Saiyan, to which Gohan responds by calling him "Prince"...IN JAPANESE. I would have liked to see a made up something versus just using a word from another language. Especially if it's Japanese, because all the Weeaboos and Japanese language lovers already know that word and KNOW it's Japanese. That part kind of ruined the mood for me, I can't lie. Other than that, I was all for it!

Oh and, the ending was epic.