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This was really cute and sweet. I liked how you showed Heero struggling to figure out exactly what he was feeling. And how you made his reason for giving in to the feelings the need to understand them. I also appreciated the effort made to make the story realistic and unique. Instead of uncomplicated hot sex suddenly ensuing and progressing without a hitch, you showed the awkwardness and the pain that often comes with it. It was disturbing, and yet sweet after seeing how bad Heero felt about what happened. Still possibly rape (or at least borderline) in the beginning, but Duo was able to forgive him for it--a testament to his hardy and empathetic personality that I think you've done a wonderful job of representing. I think you also did a good job of showing Relena's obsessive tendencies without bashing her too much. All in all, I loved this piece. It was a lot of fun to read. Thank you for sharing!

OMG! That was awesome! Animalistic, out of control, and wonderful! Bravo!