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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sniff, sniff. So sad, so very sad, Cell you sexily bad bastard. Being caught mastruabting and fucking yourself in front of people is sick, esp when it's a minature you. Narcisstic. And I'm happy for Cell Jr. or Happy as he's now known, plz, plz, I beg of you do a sequel.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:O
That was really...well-put ending XD
Not what was trying to say, but, I'll get there....
I feel funny about Cell Jr. He has a strange character, and reminds me of Saibamen but it makes him all the more...inspiring? I liked how you ended it "abruptly" though, it worked! I LOVED CELL BEST THOUGH, he was just AWESOME! Even though he's not even in this chapter XD
Gohan through the whole thing was the actually best part though. I'm a total and complete Gohan-fan, so I was satisfied LOL. But really, I loved how you made him more mopey about everything and depressed, it makes more sense for him to be that way after all! Beautifully written, even with the couple of mistakes in there~!
Keep writing D< Especially ones that are as awesome as this one AND that coolio one-shot that I totally can't get out of my head anymore XDDD.
~Much love and luck,
~Lunamaru
That was really...well-put ending XD
Not what was trying to say, but, I'll get there....
I feel funny about Cell Jr. He has a strange character, and reminds me of Saibamen but it makes him all the more...inspiring? I liked how you ended it "abruptly" though, it worked! I LOVED CELL BEST THOUGH, he was just AWESOME! Even though he's not even in this chapter XD
Gohan through the whole thing was the actually best part though. I'm a total and complete Gohan-fan, so I was satisfied LOL. But really, I loved how you made him more mopey about everything and depressed, it makes more sense for him to be that way after all! Beautifully written, even with the couple of mistakes in there~!
Keep writing D< Especially ones that are as awesome as this one AND that coolio one-shot that I totally can't get out of my head anymore XDDD.
~Much love and luck,
~Lunamaru
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Impressive... Good writing, and a fun idea. I laughed and was impressed at the same time I would give this a 6/5
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my goodnes fucking balls! So entertaining and well-written! Love how you portray Cell! <3
And this 2nd to last line: "He looked them all over hungrily, his gaze lingering longer on Gohan than most."
Does that refer to some rape in the sequel to this one? XDDDD Because that's what I'd love to happen XD
Great story, please continue! <3
And this 2nd to last line: "He looked them all over hungrily, his gaze lingering longer on Gohan than most."
Does that refer to some rape in the sequel to this one? XDDDD Because that's what I'd love to happen XD
Great story, please continue! <3