rate_review Reviews

I love the story! I love how you describe Goku's thoughts. Too many stories focus on vegeta's POV, not Goku as it is difficult to capture him. you did a great job. Love the lemon, it was hot.

Thank you, topbear. It is harder to portray Goku. He is so singular in the series. He is either nice or kicking butt when he gets mad after someone dies. I always hoped that Goku would have a deeper side. That is why I try to write Goku's thoughts out in most of my stories. Sean Schemmel, the english voice actor who played Goku, said that he liked Goku, but the good guy thing was boring. I like a darker Goku. ^^

Anywho, thanks for reading.

Good first story. I like how you write.

It was a little rushed though, I would have preferred more chapters getting them together, rather than them falling for each other so quickly without much complaining, soul searching, and trying to resist their impluses.

I look forward to your next story :)

Thanks for the reviews! This was my first story, so the sex scene didn't come out as well as it could have. Thanks for reading!

Interesting story. Not too long but enjoyable. Good job :)

Wow interesting! I am very intrigued so far! I love stories that involve Goku's personality on a deeper level. I think the growing relationship between him and Vegeta is great, too. I can't wait to see what happens next!