rate_review Reviews

It's so funny to see the characters that we know from DBZ like Dr. Gero and the andriod in a story like this that sort of changes the meaning of that character and the relationships between them all, but you do such a good job of rewriting a character into the story itself and redifining that role while still holding true and making it entertaining. I can't help but enjoy seeing them all in the chess-tournament scenerio and how they seem to come together.

At first I wasn't sure if I was going to be interested in reading it because it was very a/u but once I started I just kept being compelled to go to the next chapter. It flows very well. The relationship that Chi Chi creates with Vegeta is cute and it's nice how it's happier type of fiction where they're all in the perfect position to be making plays with each other at this point in their lives.

I like Eddie and the unexpected relationship that you developed between Chi Chi and Raditz, and I LOVED Vegeta and Goku practically fucking on the floor, Goku much more interested in Vegeta's type of games obviously! And one my favorite things in the story was the mention of Bunni and her hubby, I always like those two :)

All in all it was fun read and I'm glad I didn't pass it over

an awesome , beautifully well written fic :D

Loved this. It was kind of... adorable? I couldn't help but picture the characters as "chibis" from time to time as I read. You are a great writer - thanks for creating this!

This is kind of bittersweet. On one hand, I'm sad it's over. On the other, I'm happy that it's over and ends happily. Hopefully you continue to write such entertaining stories. Thank you for posting this one. Peace!

you are so crafty! and yes! I will say it for you: SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Sequel!!!
you cannot end it here! too much left unsaid and undone!

Please, PLEASE, PLEASE continue!