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Well i actually finished reading this last night but i was too lazy to write the review then. This is a great story, and i'm not including the amazingly written smut either. I enjoyed reading this, especially the Goku/Gohan. The way you got their relationship started was actually pretty believable, more so then i have seen other's do. Anyways loved the story.

Can you please write more GokuxGohan? .___. Pleeeeeease? -Puppy eyes.-

Woohoo! A month away I can see the complete story!
My heart was broken when see Gohan like that. Your wrote the angst very well. I felt so sad for both of them. Vegeta's plan is so cunning and he is so intellegent. This story is full of mind quiz which I love. The final plot of using Buu to separate them is ingenius!

I absolutely love this story which must take a lot of your brain to fabricate. Love the way to unveil the secrete one by one. Please keep on writing!

omfg, i totally thought u were going to do a sequel! i mean, with only a couple more chapters added on,i thought there was no way it would be over so soon, but it is! and holy cow it was AWSOME! i totally got all sappy around the time that Gohan starts trying to distance himself and then his accident! WAAHHH! ToT but it was still a totally awsome story! way to go!

keep on writing,

luv-blonde-bunny

Yes, I love what I read by you, so I do have to take the chance to read this... even if I'm so awfully behind now. XD
I loved this chapter and I should definitely not take to long to get the rest of them down!

An update!!! Gosh, how I love goku plays 'the big daddy' it is so dominate and protective. Totally love it. Vegeta, is surprisingly understanding and handy in this situation. I felt sorry for those guys who dare to drug gohan. @ cringe@

I miss gohan being super saiyan, must be sexy as hell. Vegeta such a pervert, watching the video. I felt sorry for him too. Now kakarott is gone, he is loverless. I absolute lobe the drama when goku wakesup. He is such a gentle seme that gohan had him wrap around his fingers. I can see his love towards gohan runs deep. It is all very sweet.
Now I wonder what vegeta' s next plan. This chapter is a bit short. I very much look forward to your next update.

oooo! what have u got planned in that dastardly little mind of yours? ;3

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In regards to wondering what to do with Tarble, perhaps you can spark up some action between him and Vegeta. Since you already have the incest warning in place and since it seems to me that Vegeta's not all that 'appalled' by what's going on between Goku and his son it wouldn't be much of a stretch that he'd have no aversion to some 'fun' with his 'little' brother. Just a suggestion. Ever since I've heard of this new character to the DBZ 'family' I've been fascinated. I haven't been able to see that special because all the ones I've seen are only available in Japanese. It would be nice if they'd bring an English version of it here.

I actually reviewed three time already and it is still not on. *crash the mobile phone.

I saw this update the first day it has been put on. I was really excited. Somehow my long review got lost before posting I got frustrated. But anyway, I want to say is it is a lovely chapter. Yaya. You got me checking everyday to see if there is any update.

So Vegeta has a plan then. I wonder whether he included Sons. Will he get objection from them, or rather helps? I look forward to see how this evolve.

Vegeta is not mad then. I was a bit surprised. I wished he has more dramatic reaction but he took it rather well. However he drown several drinks, that must be covering the turmoil inside<- let imagination run wild. Anyway I guess it is reasonable since they have been split for a year. So diaappointment is his main reation.

I am glad goohan and goku made up and had a bit talk as well. It is good that they resolve the problem together. However I still can see the issue is not gone yet. There will still be relationship hurdles. Haha. They are very cute together. Shame vegeta would not like to be a uke. But what if in future Vegeta offers to be uke again? would goku take the bait. There are still tests for their feeing.

Somebody sets eyes on gohan. Oh dear god. I hope he embrace himself for goku's wrath. Mhahaha.

looking forward to seeing your next update!!