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Darn. this website is definitely again me!! I finally put an review on and it is only half of it. The rest of the reviews are here:

I am glad that Gohan and goku made up. Howeve I can feel the issue has not gone away and will come back and affect the two. What if Vegeta offer to be uke? would Goku take the bait? that can be a test/proof of his love to gohan. They are actually so cute together!!

Somebody sets their eyes on gohan. Oh dear god. I worried that they are going to face goku's wrath then. Mmhaha. Looking forward to you next update!!

yeah it's alwys difficult to write in a personality when u haven't been given much to work w/ from the canon. i think yur doing a marvolus job of it though :) i'm curious how you're going to work this story. u seem to have a lot of different angles, so the possibilities are mind boggling ^^

keep on writing,

luv-0blonde-bunny

I was denied my GohanxGoku lemon! But I'll forgive you since this chapter was written so wonderfully. I was a bit surprised by Vegeta's seemingly easy acceptance of their relationship, but I can also see how he'd be plotting on how to use that to his advantage too.

This story draws me in each more with each chapter!

This is a great and original story! I love the setting and I love the way the characters are interacting. Gohan and Goku are two of my favorite characters from the DragonBall Z series so putting them together is excellent for me. I like the idea of them as a pair and I am excited to see how it works out for them later in the story. I will continue reading! Thank you for writing it!

once again, f-ing hot! XD this is one hell of a story! now i'm all curious if Tarble'll tell Vegeta what he saw >) heeheehee

keep on writing,

luv-blonde-bunny

Oh.my.god. table found out! In such a dramatic way. I wonder what would be his reaction. What vegeta would do when he know. Would it be a full war between vegeta'house and son's house? I felt like shot hit the fan.

However, I am glad goku has manage to get gohan back. At least they share some same understanding and feelings. The angery sex and the make up is hot, as per your normal standard. I love your way of describing saiyan hierarchies and how gohan as his father, don't care about it. I am so glad I have checked today. It is a great Christmas gift. Merry Christmas to you too.

Ah, I loved this all the way through and then that last chapter had me more than excited to see what it so to come of it. I can't wait!
I absolutely loved it and the tension made it a thousand times better than it already was. I am very glad that I started reading this! I think you have done a wonderful job so far and I will be waiting for more. I will be sure to keep up with this story.

Oh oh saiyan love fight!!! I LOVE the tension moving under the scene. I felt for goku's care to gohan and gohan's dark feeling is surging, just waiting for an outlet. This chapter is one of the best dragon ball fanfiction I have ever read. When goku ask vegeta to help, I am not sure he saw the result. And vegeta, how I love his reaction! He will make sure you got more than what you bargain for. I love goku asert his authority. Both get a kick on the ass. Totally love this chapter. Can not wait for another update. Part of me wants to Chase you hard. Part of me don't want story to go quickly then I need to wait a long time before another story worth me checking every day. Look forward to anotherupdate.

I read this chapter again. I really like gohan go mystic. That is pure glorious. I wonder when vegeta prroposed gohan to stay, did he mean it or just a way to goad goku? Did he want goku to jealous?for himself, not gohan. His reaction is gold, typical vegeta. Tarble is so cute in this fiction, make me sorry for his level. I hope he have someone too in future. Sorry about the typo. Computer broken. Type from mobile and no spell check. Really look forward to next chapter. You cannot hang us over the Christmas and new year.

WEE!! Another excellent chapter! I'm loving the originality of this fic so far. The setting on a ship and introductory of other Saiyajins makes this exciting and unique; not to mention the pairings. Considering the timeline and sitation, I think you're doing a wonderful job with the characters. No one is too OOC and everyone has that Saiyajin edge and attitude to them. Just perfect! I look forward to the next chapter.