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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta! Oh my god! Vegeta! Jump from the bed and running around. Behold yourself woman, this story is all about goku and gohan! So deep breeth deep breeth..... now i can talk.
I absolutely LOVE this chapter. I like your detailed description of the scenes. Made me enjoy the metal feast provided by your imagination. I love how you describe the reactions of the relevent party. It is all fun to read. I also love your way of starting a completely new thread. Appear randomly. But made the flow of the story so enticing. Like kale, rhonda, icejins. These stories woven into the main threath, made me anticipate what is going to happen. You are very good at arrange your plot. The reading is never boring.
Now come back to say the part most interested me. The triangles, vegeta and gohan and kakarotto. You made my day, or my evening! I absolutely love vegeta' reaction! The scene in the dinning room. That is actually quite sweet form vegeta side. I wonder what he would react if he knows the truth. He is right to be the leader of saiyans. However, when gohan followed goku on the bridge i was actually very excited, knowing the power level of the two. It felt like possess treasure while walking in the crowd. The amont of feeling of danger and excitement and security. I also love the family cosy feeling he share with goku while walking. I wonder what gohan would be in this battle. I so look forward to see him make his future among other saiyans.
The story vegeta came up to cover kakarotto works out fine with goku. Who said he is dumb. This is ingenius! I love the feeling that we know something underneath not the face value. I can see that he and goku being on and off as both are very strong characters. It takes great love and a lot compromise for this two to be together. While gohan is much easier. They are from the same house and share the same value. The two being together, actually can be a quite formidable force! They are very sweet together.
All in all i love the complecations, triangles this story brings. I also love when you post, you post a solid side chapter. Enough for me to have a satisfactory bed reading. Just make sure you are not worn off. Rubbing Macha's wrist.
I absolutely LOVE this chapter. I like your detailed description of the scenes. Made me enjoy the metal feast provided by your imagination. I love how you describe the reactions of the relevent party. It is all fun to read. I also love your way of starting a completely new thread. Appear randomly. But made the flow of the story so enticing. Like kale, rhonda, icejins. These stories woven into the main threath, made me anticipate what is going to happen. You are very good at arrange your plot. The reading is never boring.
Now come back to say the part most interested me. The triangles, vegeta and gohan and kakarotto. You made my day, or my evening! I absolutely love vegeta' reaction! The scene in the dinning room. That is actually quite sweet form vegeta side. I wonder what he would react if he knows the truth. He is right to be the leader of saiyans. However, when gohan followed goku on the bridge i was actually very excited, knowing the power level of the two. It felt like possess treasure while walking in the crowd. The amont of feeling of danger and excitement and security. I also love the family cosy feeling he share with goku while walking. I wonder what gohan would be in this battle. I so look forward to see him make his future among other saiyans.
The story vegeta came up to cover kakarotto works out fine with goku. Who said he is dumb. This is ingenius! I love the feeling that we know something underneath not the face value. I can see that he and goku being on and off as both are very strong characters. It takes great love and a lot compromise for this two to be together. While gohan is much easier. They are from the same house and share the same value. The two being together, actually can be a quite formidable force! They are very sweet together.
All in all i love the complecations, triangles this story brings. I also love when you post, you post a solid side chapter. Enough for me to have a satisfactory bed reading. Just make sure you are not worn off. Rubbing Macha's wrist.
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! loving it! ^^ please tell me, though, that Vegeta's not planning on anything w/ Gohan, is he? omg, if u do, i'm totally curious how Gohan's gonna get out of it. oh well, too soon to tell i guess ^^
keep on writing,
luv-blonde-bunny
keep on writing,
luv-blonde-bunny
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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An update!! Many thanks.
The tension between the son and father is high and I can see the mutual attraction is unstopable! Both are quite related and similar to each other and both are gorgeous guys it is not a surprise. I like how you describe the relationship between saiyans and other aliens. So Goku was not the leader of the alies but a useful soldier. I wonder how he and gohan can survive ane evolve in this war. And after war, would they go back? Chichi would be so mad!! So would Vegeta,hoho.
You have mentioned Goku walked out Vegeta's ship due to personnel complicated issues. Is that because the dominance issues? well it seems to be Vegeta's loss then. I wish him jealous in green, hahaha. Only kidding. I know this story is about kaka and gohan.
I especailly like your lemon they are not only hot but also serve to evolve the plot. They don't seem to be meaningless PWP (although i welcome that too). So far the two encounter all make sense-first is to meet each other the second is to get their feeling sorted. I like lemon like that, with feelings.
Again I absolutely love how your describe the feelings between them, reflected in the small actions like smell, hug and eyes contact. I can totally see the emotion underneath. and it is so nice to see them recognise each other. i look forward to reading more.
The tension between the son and father is high and I can see the mutual attraction is unstopable! Both are quite related and similar to each other and both are gorgeous guys it is not a surprise. I like how you describe the relationship between saiyans and other aliens. So Goku was not the leader of the alies but a useful soldier. I wonder how he and gohan can survive ane evolve in this war. And after war, would they go back? Chichi would be so mad!! So would Vegeta,hoho.
You have mentioned Goku walked out Vegeta's ship due to personnel complicated issues. Is that because the dominance issues? well it seems to be Vegeta's loss then. I wish him jealous in green, hahaha. Only kidding. I know this story is about kaka and gohan.
I especailly like your lemon they are not only hot but also serve to evolve the plot. They don't seem to be meaningless PWP (although i welcome that too). So far the two encounter all make sense-first is to meet each other the second is to get their feeling sorted. I like lemon like that, with feelings.
Again I absolutely love how your describe the feelings between them, reflected in the small actions like smell, hug and eyes contact. I can totally see the emotion underneath. and it is so nice to see them recognise each other. i look forward to reading more.
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December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol...just to be clear, all I did was pick out a few typos! :)
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December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omfg, i freaking love this story! i think i'm going to have to stalk the story now, just to catch it every time it updates ;) i'm dying to see how this story progresses. i'm curious if you'll have their relationship be the main point of conflict, or if you're going to make the war they're involved in become, well, involved. lol sorry - bad joke ^^;. but, i'm enjoying it so far, and am finding it WAY sexy. can't wait to read more ;)
keep on writing,
luv-blonde-bunny
keep on writing,
luv-blonde-bunny
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November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
W0w!! This story is so promissing. I love the start. It seems the Saiyans are for new adventure. I love advendure and any fantasy idea come out of your wicked mind. I can see the pairing is Gohan/ goku. Although I am a hard core kaka/vege fan, cause it is from you, I actually quite look forward to see what happens between the two. I always loved Gohan. As a kid his life is so usual and he was the second/replacing hero for goku.
I love when kais talked about sons. It seems there will be new enamy in the galaxy. I was immediately hooked. When came to second chapter, the begining is so grand and detailed, I felt like a star war movie unveiled itself in front of my eyes (read twice in order to get hold of all details). I wonder the reason Vegeta and Goku go separate way. I can totally see that Goku wants to be the leader of the "inpure". With Gohan onboard he should be much well equipped. ^:^. I also love the encounter of son and the father. Oh. my. god. Your way of writing made me felt so pleased and conflcted for them at the same time, and hot.
Goku still love Chichi so he even want a whore in her form. I felt bad for a minute for him. But I dont feel bad at all when he and gohan being together. you keep them very in character. The passion between them strangely made me feel clean (unlike vegeta's which is always some kind of dark). I know it is weired as it is from a incest yet it actually felt angelic (hope you know what Imean).
I totally love this story. The setting is complicated and inspiring and enticing. The describtion of the emotion is brilliant, fitting well in the situation. The plot is very interesting. I really look forward to read more.
I love when kais talked about sons. It seems there will be new enamy in the galaxy. I was immediately hooked. When came to second chapter, the begining is so grand and detailed, I felt like a star war movie unveiled itself in front of my eyes (read twice in order to get hold of all details). I wonder the reason Vegeta and Goku go separate way. I can totally see that Goku wants to be the leader of the "inpure". With Gohan onboard he should be much well equipped. ^:^. I also love the encounter of son and the father. Oh. my. god. Your way of writing made me felt so pleased and conflcted for them at the same time, and hot.
Goku still love Chichi so he even want a whore in her form. I felt bad for a minute for him. But I dont feel bad at all when he and gohan being together. you keep them very in character. The passion between them strangely made me feel clean (unlike vegeta's which is always some kind of dark). I know it is weired as it is from a incest yet it actually felt angelic (hope you know what Imean).
I totally love this story. The setting is complicated and inspiring and enticing. The describtion of the emotion is brilliant, fitting well in the situation. The plot is very interesting. I really look forward to read more.