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person InvaderWannabe
schedule February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow only one more chapter left? I feel like there's so much that still needs to happen, but hey I have faith in your writing :) Can't wait for the final update.
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely THRILLED to pieces when you updated this story. I love how you kept the Japanese traditions (and I'm sure it cannot have been easy to do so). I would love to see Vegeta and Goku get married!! Yaaay!
schedule August 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
happy to see the update. cant wait to read the rest. keep up the good work.
schedule June 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really wish this story was done. I was so looking forward to see if vegeta would really have to marry ookami. I think he should just kill ookami and get it over with.
person OYM
schedule May 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. It's slow in places, but it is understood that some scenes are necessary for a good story. I have liked all the stories you've put on this site, and hope that you eventually finish them all. Thanks for writing.
person Zofo
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So Akuto is after Hokoru, how creepy, and Ookami is getting worse by the day. I don't know how Vegeta can stand it! Please don't make him marry him :( Can't they kill Ookami as well as Akuto?
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoy how Vegeta care about Kaka. it is so sweet!! Now we know that Vegeta's father's problem with Akuro. I wish they can solve the problem. I seriously wonder how they are going to turn the table.
person Dragon7
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Zofo
schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally caught up with this story and it's wonderful :)

I was worried that Lord Hokoru was only stringing Vegeta along and would capture Kakarot so was very relived when he didn't. Now they have to find a way to get them back and prevent Vegeta's marriage but it seems they are outnumbered, and now Karaot is out of commision for a while the odds against them are even worse! The tension is palpable.

Can't wait for more :)
schedule May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is intriguing. Is kaka in danger. Please update soon.

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