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ahh very beautifull well written :D

wow this is awesomeness, thankgod, vegeta's dad agrees with him

I am glad vegeta and his father agreed on helping kakarotto. I am intrigued as to what happened between akuru and vegetas father. The plot is getting thick, and I love to see where this is going. Thanks for the update.

Yaya!! An update! I am so glad to see such a quite update. I had the imagine of vegeta having two swords in his hands. It is quite cute. I laughed with Kakarotto when vegeta said he wants to be on top. Well I hope he will succeed in future. The lemon is great. So they come up with a plan to get back Kakarotto's status? I am curious how, as Kakarotto doesn't seem to have power at the moment apart from his skill. I look forward to reading more.

I am sorry to hear that you failed your tests. I hope it is not because you are too dwelled on updating the story.<-feel pan of guilty for asking more. I think the real life is hard we need to keep up with it. When we have a secure future then we can unleash the imagination in the world of Kaka and veggie. Hehe. Gook luck with your next plan. I look forward to read more of your story when you have spare time to update. Don't worry if it takes long as good story worth the wait.

Wow, it seems my guess is correct. I am sorry you have to rush a bit. I hope it is not because I guessed the result. the story is very enticing. Now i wonder how can kakarotto and vegeta deal with the enemies. How would they tide over all the difficulties.

Looking forward to read more.

This is an interesting turn of story. So Akuro wants kakaroto to take over? I am slightly worried that he actually wants to get kakarotto out and kill him. A bit like hamlet. He is the evil uncle who killed kaka's parents and then want him for life.

I look forward to read more.

Awww... you are going to leave this story for a while. I understand college is important. As long as you don't abandon it. I am patient. What I worry is auther lose the interest after a while and the story would not continue. That would be a shame.

please make sure you come back when you can. thanks.

That is the interesting turn of story. i am so happy Kakaroto is also a noble. it felt like romeo found his juliet. So Kakarotto is framed? I look forward to see next turn of story. Please update soon.

BTW, I was the anon above. Don't know why AFF don't show my name

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Awwww...The confession between kakarott and vegeta melt my heart. I am so curious what kaka is hiding. Please let it be a happy ending.

Thank god that guard arrive on time. I became worrie. I really love this story. It is incredibly cute. The drunken love is a pro. Can't wait to see next update.

ahh it's very beautifully well written, i love how well you portay vegeta as a ninja & goku as a samurai so well