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March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter pleaz cliff hangers are the worst I love this story so far pleaz continue
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January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good plot. Terrible structure. Work a little harder on elaboration as well... I doubt Vegeta would be so quick to admit his love for book and book is a little too simple to express himself in such a way...
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August 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this. Make em a bit longer though. I will try to wait for the next one.
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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really like this story, I sure hope you continue with this. I like Goku being the uke.
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July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Can't wait until next chapter uploaded
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July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter....great story!
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April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the first chapter..and would lovee to read more so I hope you continue this story..it seems like it will be very sweet, sexy and fun!
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April 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter continue please an i want to know who will carry the children i just want to know you don't have to tell me. if you don't want to.