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by HappilyJaded

person Kenji-kun
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm, an absolutely yummy chapter. So what have you cooked for us in the next one? Are we going to see some hot threesome?*winks*

You really did a great job.^_^ Now on to the next one please.
person mel
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yes! a new chapter! I\'m reading every one. I didn\'t like that yaoi chapter b.c it doesn\'t appeal to me, but i do like this story. fast updates too. keep em\' coming! (pun intended? you decide.)
person Evil Dr. Muraki
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! 3 against two and majority always wins. Especially when you have in that majority the perfect soldier Heero Yuy.v_v

Looks like this time, he won\'t just beat Trowa but do something much more sinister to him like blow him away with his gun. And I\'m speaking of the gun that kills, not the one he used last time they met.^_~ Of course my guess would likely be g esg especially if you view that last scene where Heero reached and stroked his firearm as symbolism for something else other than the obvious.^_~

Now what\'s wrong with Une, Milliardo and Heero? Do they really think that a lil scolding would break the sexual spell that Trowa has so enraptured Relena with? We\'re talking about 3 months of sex games and manipulations from deliciously evil Trowa here.^_~ So it would take something much more tha that...I just hope it will not take death to any of them folenalena to wake up. Especially not of Trowa\'s since I\'m rooting for him.^_~ If only he\'ll realize in his heart that she means much more than just a sex slave then everything would be alright I guess. But then Relena doesn\'t really want his love right? Guh, so complicated.^_~

Anyway, you did a really fantastic job on this chapter.^_____^ Our beloved characters have now reached the turning point where choices have to be made. I just hope they make the right ones.^_~

Arigatou Gosaimasu for a great read and goodluck to your next chapter.^_^
person Kenji-kun
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shite! There\'s going to be a confrontation between Hee-chan and Relena pretty soon. I can sense it! Anyhoo, I hate making a fool of myself so I shall keep my mouth shut and just wait for the next one.;) Till then..I bid you good luck on your writing. Update soon please!
person Princess Leia
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is just fantastic! Another great erotic chapter for us who crave for more Trowa/Relena action.^_~ But that\'s not all...I love the way you keep us guessing all the time whether or not the characters stay true to themselves. It seto mto me they\'re not what they seem and they all have tricks under the sleeves.^_^
person Peach
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I found myself feeling a lil feverish after I read you story, I just had to take a shower!;) Relena\'s obviously threading dangerous grounds here. Getting herself caught up between these two is not going to do her any good. But she\'s so blinded by lust for Trowa she couldn\'t distance herself from him. Guh! That\'s why I love your story so much! There\'s just so much that can be done and I\'m sure you have lined up a few more surprises along the way. So keep it coming.:) Can\'t hardly wait for the next one!
person Jezebel
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man! Your sh*t is tight! You gawna make a great novelist! RESPECT to ya. Peace Out.
person 3xR go!
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi! Finally an updaI keI kept checking back here but I was disappointed quite a few number of times. YOu took much longer to write this one but it\'s all worth it especially that you made it an extremely hot Tro and Rel chapter. Just the way I want it!*WIPES SWEAT OFF FOREHEAD* Make sure to update your story soon and goodluck to your writing.*GRINS*
person Mint
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, Trowa is really a wacko... and Heero is mentally unstable... I feel so sorry for Relena. And especially when she finut iut it was Heero, not Trowa, who took her that other night. But nevertheless, this is one very interesting story. I find myself rereading this fic many times. Hope the next chapter will be out really soon! ^_^
person Tessa
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! This is just the way I like it!:-D Relena was acting so much like a junkie with Trowa as heack.ack.;-D This is really awesome! Though it took you a lil while to come out with it, it\'s very much worth the wait.;-D:-D

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