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by HappilyJaded

person Peach
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope Trowa schemes his way back to Relena\'s pants errr...heart I mean before Heero Yuy.*EVIL LAUGH* Trowa just won\'t take this sitting down, ne? Write more please.:)
person Mint
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... (I find myself saying this after reading every single one of your chapters from this fic. *lol*) That was really unexpected. If Heero is capable of doing that to Trowa, what will he do to Relena? o_O Evil Trowa is somewhat scary. But an angry Heero is just as scary too... But the two of them are still so damn sexy! Please update soon! I can\'t wait until the next chapter!
person LaLa
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad that it seems Heero\'s resolved to get Relena and how he goes about it I\'m sure you\'ll make quite interesting, though the boy best be honest about \"everything\" can\'t be giving Trowa any amunition to come back and try to disrupt things. Oi, the blackmail he could use on Relena and Heero alone would be damaging, that\'s why I think Heero and Relena need to come clean withh oth other about all thier sorid deeds, she about her escapades and he about his. Together they could take Trowa down if need be.

But then this fic\'s been so unpredictable lord knows what you\'re going to decide to do.

Please continue! ^_^
person Yaoi Gurl
schedule November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t read het fics but I made an exception with yours cause it\'s so good. Can\'t wait to see what you have cooked up for us in the next chapter.
person ls-u
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. that was pretty intense. even if he is a manipulative fuck, trowa\'s still hot. ;-) good luck getting the next chapter out! i\'m really looking forward to the rest of the story.
person Evil Dr. Muraki
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Will this lil punishment give the upper hand to Heero?O_o I hope not. I\'m Trowa Barton all the way!^_^ He\'s manipulative and evil but that\'s the reason why he was able to enslave Relena to begin with. He\'s got this charisma and grace under pressure thing. Will he fold to Heero\'s will? I certainly hope not.^_^ I hope Trowa get to pay him back with more pain than all the punches he received ahe ahe almost non-consensual fucking he gave him.

Btw, the yaoi scene wasn\'t bad at all. It\'s perfect actually. The scene calls for really rough sex and that\'s what you wrote.^_^

Please update right away. Can\'t get enough of your story.^_____^
person Misty Barton
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
He\'s a manipulative fuck? Sure he is. He\'s also cooler and sexier than Heero Yuy could ever hope to be. Next time make Trowa beat the shit out of Heero okay?;) My Trowa doesn\'t deserve such punishment.;) This is another great chappy lady. I\'m already looking forward to the next one.:)
person Talent
schedule November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No doubt you have the faculties in writing such compelling fiction. However, you really ought to think of giving beta readers a chance to review your work. You had a few missing letters on certain words or grammatical errors in some sentences. A beta reader will do you wonders. Other than that, you have a great story in your hands. I enjoy reading them.
person Misty Barton
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jesus! This fic is piping hot! 3xR go go go! I love what you did to Trowa in this story. I just have one question for you...Will he end up with anyone or just stay a recluse forvever on L2?
person Princess Leia
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!! This is soooo GREAT! Trowa\'s oozing with sexiness because he\'s so damn bad and cunning. Keep up the good work lady.^______^ I\'ll be back for updates.

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