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for unrequited

by HappilyJaded

person Billie
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An update finally.^_^ Huh? Is Relena blind or something? How could she not know who it was?O_O Regardless, I still couldn\'t get enough of this wonderful fiction of yours.^____^ So please update soon.
person Evil Dr. Muraki
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay! An update!:D Albeit, it\'s a bit short still it\'s very mmmm hot.;) Well, just what the hell was Heero thinking? Trowa and Relena had been together longer and they had a pretty intense few months of sex. It\'s natural that she\'d be longing for him and utter his name instead of his.;) Is this going to be a death fic? I hope not...I really like Trowa to win over Yuy.;):D But I don\'t like them to kill each other either. Okay enough, I\'m babbling.

Thanks for the update but I couldn\'t get enough of your story so please UPDATE SOON!:D And hopefully a much longer chapter next time.:)
person Bucho
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Read all chapters in one seating. It\'s wonderfully well written for a sort of soft porn fic. I love the premise of the story. It\'s really very good. Two thumbs up I should say. And like everyone else is saying...updates are very much welcome.
person turtlefire
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great fiction! I am a hardcore yaoi fan but your sensual writing makes me crave for more of \"unrequited\".ove ove a cunning, manipulative Trowa. And I would love to see Heero fell into Trowa\'s trap! Keep up the good work!
person Mint
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was really hot. *fans herself* Maybe Heero should kidnap Relena and keep her there until she learns to scream his name instead of Trowa\'s. *snickers* Update soon! I can\'t wait until the next chapter!
person ls-u
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t care if you made him the bad guy!!! go 3xR!!! they\'re much more sexy. :-) good job with the story.
person Billie
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re ficcie got so many hits and rightfully so. I just don\'t understand why some people are so lazy to review.O_O Me? I love reviewing so as to inspire the authors to get to the next chapter. Okay, got that out of my system now.^_~

I just love your story so much. Why? First of all, I love racy fics.^_^;;; Secondly, you write well save for a few mispelled words or missing letters other than that...I agree with the reviewers. It\'s simply addicting!^______^ I almost fell off my seat reading chapter 10. Really didn\'t see that one coming. I love your ptwistwists...and I\'m sure there are more coming.^_^ And please keep it coming. I have to read MORE!^_^

Do you have a beta reader?
person Tessa
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A friend of mine recommended your story. What can I say? I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I like it a lot!:-) Update asap!
person Margaux Tenenbaum
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The best chapter so far. I\'m a big fan of 1x3 but I also love 3xR and your story have both. So what\'s not to love about it?*winks* It\'s panty wetting indeed and so much more.*evil hentai grin*
person Mint
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... *_* That relevation was... interesting! But what happened earlier with Relena? What did Trowa do to convince her to let him stay? Update soon! I\'m so addicted to this fic! ^_^

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