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The Untamable	By : Silvers Category: Dragon Ball Z > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 4507 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I do not own DragonballZ, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

Chapter List
- 1-Chapter 1
- 2-Chapter 2
- 3-Chapter 3
- 4-Chapter 4
- 5-Chapter 5
- 6-Chapter 6
- 7-7
- 8-8
- 9-Chapter 9
- 10-Chapter 10
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The Untamable.

AN: Okay so here is Chapter one as revised by me ummm 11 years after originally writing it! I tried to keep it as similar to the original as possible simply fixing major grammar mistakes and making the spelling of names consistent. :) Enjoy!:

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The world is not as we know it, more pain files through the streets than people ever care to realize. Most ignore the suffering because it is to much to watch and see. The story that follows is that of one of these suffering souls. Someone’s life that is just to much to look at but even worse to live in.

He lies trembling cold and in pain in his blood soaked bed; yet he never let a single tear escape from his eyes. His fists clench more tightly the covers as anger envelopes. He moves to sit up, but the pain was too much to bare, he falls over again. A small hiss leaves his lips and it grows more feral as he tries yet again.

Successful he manages to pull himself off the bed and half walk and half drag himself to the shower. The smell of his enemy all over his flesh, he had to wash it off. He couldn’t stand the stentch. He turned on the water to a near boiling point, and pushed himself into its rushing stream. His skin turned pink from the heat but he didn’t mind.

The blood on his legs dripped off and stained the white shower floor. He couldn‘t care less, the stinging of his wounds, the burn of his flesh, it was better than the humiliation afflicted to him earlier that same night.

His mind wondered back to what happened,

“Now my pet, this is how I will claim you as mine, once and for all.” A hand snakes down his back to the seam of his pants.

He growls and turns the water off, then storms off towards the bed. He pulls off the once white bed sheets which the blood had caked onto, giving them a brownish tinge. He snarls as he burns them in his hand, refusing to ever use them again.

“I will kill you, you fucking asshole if it is the last thing I do, I will kill you” Luckily the mattress itself was unaffected by the mess, being made of a liquid resistant material for this exact reason. Freeza wasn’t the only one with a temper and mattresses weren’t easy to come by space. He throws some new sheets onto the bed, these ones are pitch black, because the bed as long as it was his would never again see pale sheets.

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Cold water splashes upon his face waking him suddenly from his restless sleep. “Good morning Prince Vegeta, Lord Freeza is expecting you in his chambers immediately.” A pathetic looking minion stated in a monotone voice.

Vegeta hissed and shot a ki blast at him, shredding his uniform and causing some minor yet painful burns. “Consider yourself lucky… Lord Freeza doesn’t favour everyone… otherwise you would be dead.” The soldier grunted out before heading for the door again. “Don’t be late; you know how he can get.” The small creature added before he was gone, disappeared out the open doorway to the white uniform looking hallways.

Vegeta growled as he slowly dressed. ‚Lord Freeza would have to work by my schedule; as a Prince I obey no one.‘ He thought to himself

He cringed as he thought of what might happen but he would never show that to anyone. He slipped on his boots and walked into the hall expertly navigating the ships corridors to Freeza’s chambers. It wasn’t that hard because in the last week Vegeta’s room had been moved to a larger one only 2 halls down from the evil Lord’s.

The doors to the chamber slammed open before he could get to them “WHERE IS HE! I COMMANDED HIM TO BE HERE IMMEDIATELY!” The high pitch shout of lord Freeza was impossible to mistake.

Vegeta looked on as a minion went flying out of the open doors followed shortly by the white and purple being. Freeza saw Vegeta and at once and growled in anger. “You dare defy me? You will regret the day you were ever born you horrid little monkey!”

Before Vegeta could think a hand was around his neck lifting him from the ground. The minion had limped away taking the distraction as a perfect time to escape. Vegeta’s hands shot up to hold the one grasping his neck, trying to alleviate some of the strain without seeming weak or pathetic.

Vegeta knew he was outmatched knew he was unable to beat Freeza, but that didn’t mean he had to let Freeza win. He was carried into Freeza’s chamber and the door was quickly closed behind them. All the while the Prince’s stare never changed from that of determination. He may be in pain and barely able to breathe but he would never let that beast win… Never…

“So my pet, are you still playing this game? Do you still think your will power is more then my strength?” Freeza hissed, and tightened his hold on Vegeta’s neck.

There was an audible gasp that escaped Vegeta‘s lips, as the last of his breath escaped him and no more air was reaching his lungs. His trapped throat was burning, the squeazing fingers leaving their mark in his flesh. Frezza held him there long enough to feel Vegeta’s hands weaken on his own as blackness was starting to overcome him.

“See I told you, you cannot win!” He snickers and released the Prince who fell to the floor involuntarily gasping for breath and coughing.

Before he can regain himself, he is brutally kicked flying more than halfway across the room; His ribs making a cruel snapping sound. Small pools of blood start dripping from his mouth as he coughed, yet not a word escaped his lips. Not a whimper nor a groan nor a single sign that he had felt the pain came from him besides the gasps and his hand pressed upon his side as he is sprawled out on the ground.

“You know I am not a patient person Vegeta. Why must you inflict this upon yourself?” Freeza said tauntingly.

He picked up the Prince from the ground by his hair and tosses him onto the bed against the far wall. Freeza then pulls out a small vile, tilting it from side to side as he walks over to Vegeta.

“I do hate wasting healing potions on you… Especially before I even start the real fun.” The words are a cruel joke, there was nothing fun about Freeza’s actions.

Vegeta turned himself so that his back was to the wall and clamps his mouth shut, his tail tightly wound around is waist. Freeza looks at the sight and snickers.

“You think that will stop me? Poor pathetic fool.” He says almost soothingly before sitting on the bed.

He rubs one of his hands over Vegeta’s shoulder, caressing him. Vegeta lifts his hand suddenly and blasts the vial into a million pieces with a small ki blast. “No but that will.” Vegeta said with a smirk. He knew he was asking for trouble but he would never give up his pride, he would not just lie there and take it. Freeza roared in anger and whipped him harshly with his thick white tail.

“You insolent buffoon! I should kill you where you lie, but that would be too nice. You are lucky I know you well.“ His almost childlike voice rang out teasingly. „That vial contained only water.” Freeza said before he whipped him again for good measure.

He pulled out the second vial, this time his free hand shot out and grabbed Vegeta’s tail. “Now you better be good or this will hurt you a heck of a lot more.” He hissed in Vegeta’s ear.

To prove his point a loud pop was heard followed by a shriek of sheer pain. The sound did not last long though, as Vegeta gritted his teeth and closed his eyes. He would not give in. Not ever, he will not give him the satisfaction of watching him writhe in pain. A second bone popped this time Vegeta didn’t yell as he willed the pain away. He placed his mind as far away from reality as possible. It wasn’t complete, however as the pain was impossible to ignore in such a sensitive limb. He trembled his face turning red from the pain.

“Now my pet if you behave if you do as you are told it may not hurt as much! Drink the potion!” The voice was trying to be coxing, but to no avail.

A third pop, blood is now seeping from Vegeta’s lip as he bit it to stop himself from crying out. Freeza grinned in complete triumph.

“You will not last.”

Another pop and a rumbling chuckle followed all the while Vegeta’s face was contorting in pain.

“Scream again my pet, scream and beg for this potion. Whimper for me. Give in.” Freeza’s voice was cold and ruthless, a hint of ist owners meniacle ways revealed.

Vegeta growled a low hiss of words followed afterwards. “I will never give into you! I would die first!”

Freeza snickered; POP POP POP excruciating crunches each in Vegeta’s hyper sensitive tail. He groaned, the pain becoming all the more unbearable. Freeza finally releases the tail and glares at him in disgust.

“You bore me… I do not like being bored. You may leave. But you are not allowed to seek medical treatment. If I find out that you have the pain you will receive will be ten fold!” The threat was completely evident not simply from the words but from the tone.

Freeza grabbed Vegeta by the hair and dragged him outside his chambers dropping him in the hallway just on the other side of his door. The space shuttle floor was hard and cold against Vegeta’s overheated body. Before he could think anymore about it, the door was slammed closed behind him.

Vegeta closed his eyes. He was actually quite lucky, for how angry he had made Freeza he had gotten off easy. It could have been so much worse. Vegeta moved his hand cautiously to his tail and gently examined it. He flinched as sharp pains shot through him.

‚7 broken bones crap… not to mention the broken rib and other damage done. You Fucken Bastard.‘ His thoughts were angry and reflected his mood. Vegeta hissed as he rose to his feet. He then slowly stumbled his way back to his room, refusing to use the walls for support.

Other people of the ship snickered as he walked by, the mighty sayjin prince, reduced to a spectacle for lesser beings. ‚Damn Freeza… I will kill him.‘ He thought bitterly.

Vegeta made it back to his room and walked into the on suite washroom. He slowly and cautiously removed his uniform all the while trying to avoid brushing his damaged tail. He went into the shower the spray once again turned to a very hot temperature. Anytime Freeza touched him Vegeta felt the need to burn off the top layer of skin. He carefully took his tail into his hand and softly rubbed it. He had to remove the vile demon’s stink and re-examine it.

Upon his closer look, he felt some weren’t broken but rather just popped out of place. Not being allowed to go to the medical bay, he grimaced and popped them back. His knees trembled from the pain, but he managed to do all the repairs he could. After his shower Vegeta aligned the broken bones in the tail and wrapped it in a soft yet firm fabric. The pain throbbed through his entire body, but the patch job gave his tail some mobility. He couldn’t be certain that the broken bones would heal in place but if he was careful, he knew he should have complete range of motion again.

He then went about his struggle to wrap his torso, hopeful to keep his ribs stable enough to heal. “How stupid and weak must I be? My planet, destroyed and me stuck on this creature’s ship... one of his Minions… His PET.” Vegeta hissed the last word out in disgust.

He carefully lied himself down on his bed, staring at the ceiling. Slowly his eyes started to close… His thoughts drifting back to what happened. ‚maybe I should have taken the potion…‘ the pain a constant reminder, throbbing in rhythm with his heart. When he finally found sleep, it was restless as always.
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