Saiyan Enlightenment | By : CardDragonBall Category: Dragon Ball Z > Yaoi - Male/Male Views: 4529 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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Disclaimers and Warnings and Author’s Snarky
Comments:
A.
Lets all sing: This is the fic
that never ends, yes it goes on and on my friends, some people started reading it,
not knowing what it was and they’ll keep reading it forever just because this
is the fic that never ends…
B.
*cough * I do not own DB, DBZ, or DBGT. If I did DB “GT” would be ‘Group Therapy’ and DBZ would be about
Goku’s quest to get Vegeta sweaty and naked (and trapped under him while he had
his wicked way with him.)
f !sf !supportLists]>C.
This is a CONTINUATION of The Meaning of Pride. That means for this to make complete sense
you should go read MoP.
D.
Obviously, there will be ‘Saiyan’ ness. That’s (as Vegeta puts it): to include violent fighting, angry
sex and fighting for ‘dominance.’ As
well as LEMONS. Homosexuality (two male
Saiyans boinking (having sex), actually four, because Trunks & Goten get
laid too) Dirty language probably. Unexplained green smirks.
E.
Gohan’s an ass. This might
change (let us all pray it’ll change) but he held on to his ‘assness’ for forty
chapters in MoP, I don’t see him
parting with it.
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What
a sight they made, tour our of them stumbling into Bulma’s kitchen the
following morning. Their sons wearing
very tattered remains of clothing that had been ripped to shreds and then tied
together so it covered the ‘naughty bits.’
Trunks was blushing bright red and without a shirt that blush spread
right on down to his chest and his back and it would have been funnier if not
for the fact that Goten was giving his boyfriend a mighty glare as he moved
rather gingerly and bore enough bruises on his skin that it looked like
fighting Buu all over again.
“I
can’t decide which one of you looks worse,” Bulma said with a giggle. She handed little Bra to him and retrieved a
senzu bean from the jar on top the fridge.
(The crazy woman horded those beans and hid them everywhere.) “Nice make-up, Goku.” She handed the bean to Goten who took it
without an attempt to deny he needed it.
(Apparently his son accomplished the goal and successfully dominated his
mate.)
Kakarot
grinned and shrugged like it didn’t bother him in the least bit that he had
dark gray streaks running all over his face and down his neck in the shape of
Vegeta’s fingers. They didn’t look like
bruises, so nobody was going to bitch at him about he shouldn’t abuse
people…but then again, nobody could see that his hands were still dark from the
ink that he couldn’t get completely washed off his skin. “This is the last time,
Chichi,” he said, “I just wanted to say that I’ll try to take care of Gohan
now. Like you said.” Paused.
She
nodded. “He really is a good kid. He just gets confused sometimes.” A sad smile as she contemplated the death of
her earth-bound marriage, and then she nodded at him, and he nodded at
her. “I suppose I’ll see you again,
someday…”
Goku
considered this statement. “You know,
Chichi,” he said, “If they don’t let Vegeta be here, when we die, if they send
him to HFIL, I won’t leave him.” A
pause, a shrug. “So I might not see you
again.” But that was all he said, waved
at her, and then raised two fingers to his forehead.
He
had dinner to catch after all, and she had a bath to take.
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Goku: GASP!
Vegeta: What hath
happened to the lemons of yesterday?
Goku: *sob *
Vegeta: Myeh. This chapter was very subdued.
Goku: No sex! And now I have to go see my stupid son!
Gohan: Hey!
Vegeta: He’s just
being a baby. re ire it.
First off: sorry
this is so late! I know it’s like 5 PM
my time and I have guilt! GUILT! But I finished it then I couldn’t access the
site then I went swimming… So. I am sorry.
(And my hair is dripping.) Even
so, I figured that I’d take the time to respond because I have been really lazy
recently and neglecting the responses.
Webtester01:
Thanks
for that e-mail. Before it I knew
nothing about html. *sobs * Now I know a little. Yay!
And yes, it is good to see the the Go’s (I could call them Son’s)
teasing their mates.
Jaygoose:
Yay! I’m so glad I could put a grin on your
face. Especially if it stuck around for
a whole day. And *gasp * Goku and
Vegeta must never be put to shame!
*runs off to fix this problem. *
*runs
to other story to get time machine and transport self to end of the week * Lol.
I have a hard time writing just one scene. I get itchy when I don’t have more than one POV in a story. Many scenes better than just one. In fact, this story, splitting the action
between two main scenes is actually a big challenge. I love multi-scenes. ;)
SaiyajinNeko:
Yeah. Poor Goten (said dryly whilst glaring at
grinning boy.) Poor Goku. *refers to Jaygoose note about making sure
Vegeta and Goku lemons come out on top*
(no puns were intended.)
Macha:
Naw,
Goku probably doesn’t care nearly as much as like Vegeta would. If Vegeta had ink stains where folk could
see them easily he’d probably be pretty upset.
And yes, Goten did seem to enjoy the lemony escapades spurred on by
puberty. Now, what will Trunks do?
Mechanical Butterfly:
Wow! That is a lot of sleep. I’m mostly an insomniac myself, I go to
sleep early in the evening and wake up really early in the morning most of the
time. (provided I sleep through those
seven hours or so.) So yay! Sleep can be a great thing.
I
thought the hovering thing was cute in a ‘its not happening to me, so it can be
cute’ sort of way.
Didn’t
you know that Vegeta comes with many different modes? *accesses Vegeta’s garment grid and selects ‘horny monkey’
dressphere * Look! *points at Vegeta all decked out in leather
bearing leather whip * Oh, he’s got
tons of dresspheres!
You
better be working on Malicious or I’ll…I’ll…
I don’t know how to make compentent threat. *access garment grid again, changes Vegeta back to Prince * I’ll make him be MEAN to you. Yeah…that’ll work…
EleneK:
*sniffle
* I un-neglected it today. *sniffle *
and now I don’t feel so lemony anymore…
*sniffle *
the
kitchen huh? I’m not especially fond of
water scenes meself. Not entirely sure
what I like. *ponders this for a while
*
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