Never too Late

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As the pod landed near the castle, Bardock carefully picked up Prince Vegeta in his hands and flew toward Vegeta’s personal doctor: Dr. Squash. He looked back, King Vegeta would probably bark at him for letting his son go off on his own, but that was a different situation now. Vegeta was having a strange fever. Bardock entered the castle and then landed in Dr. Squash’s room immediately asking him what was wrong with the Prince.

Dr. Squash noticed Bardock as he turned around, as he looked away from the paperwork he was working on and said “Oh Bardock, Good to see you”. However his eyes widened, when he saw Vegeta in Bardock’s arms as he told Bardock to follow him “Hurry, We must get to my lab!” as they both went in. Dr. Squash grabbed his kit, and started to prepare a bed for Vegeta.

Vegeta was busy lost in unconsciousness, but yet his hands kept continuing to dig into Bardock’s arms deeper and deeper; not knowing that blood was bubbling between his fingertips and it stained his gloves as he mumbled feverish rantings. As Vegeta’s head bobbed side to side, he groaned “No..I.won’t..why..where.. (cough)

Bardock pretended his arms didn’t hurt, but ignored the pain from them as they started to bleed, but he quickly flew him into Dr. Squash’s lab and placed Vegeta on the prepared bed, and he walked back ripping a piece of his shirt, and tying it over his left arm so it stopped bleeding.

Dr. Squash smiled grimly as he looked at Bardocks arms.
"Don't worry; I'll look at you in a moment, for now you may leave. Infact, I believe the King wanted to speak with you? I mean you could stay here...but you'll only worry you're self..." Dr. Squash said as he drew a large needle out of his bag, slowly taking Vegeta's arm so that he could inject a fever breaking solution into him.

Vegeta laid on the bed moving back and forth, between being conscious and unconscious as his mind flashed back and forth trying to fight off the fever. As Soon as the medicine took hold, Vegeta’s body began to relax but thoughts from the past still ravaged his mind.

You couldn’t tell but there was a bit of light coming into Dr. Squash’s lab.. red wind softly blowing the ground..

Bardock said "Yeah...a lot more yelling ahead of me. It’s going to be a long day...King Vegeta doesn't sound like he's a pleasant mood right now.

Dr. Squash couldn't help but chuckle a little, it was out of nervousness and understanding, for he too knew that yelling from the king was going to come his way as well.
"Well, don't worry, things will hopefully get better..." Dr. Squash said, turning and looking at Prince Vegeta, sighing sadly as he realized that there were limits to what he could do for the prince.

Meanwhile near Dr. Squash’s lab, and in a big corridor nearby, Bardock’s youngest son Kakkarot (Not Goku in this story) rushed down the corridor had just heard that his father had returned, and he was excited. However he had just turned the corner, when he ran into his older brother Raditz, which was with Nappa at the time and they walked past him.
Kakkarot wasn’t in the mood for his brother’s bad mood so he said “Shove it brother, aren’t you worried about what is going on?”. Kakkarot had a bad feeling something bad was going to happen at anytime

Raditz just looked at him and said “We’ll find out soon enough.. wait until father fills us in.. that is after the King is done with him..” as he continued walking with Nappa, leaving his brother to stand there like an idiot.

Bardock had just finished talking with Dr. Squash, and then turned to go see the King. He flew to the throne room a little annoyed.as he passed his youngest son in the corridor. Hey Kakkarot.." "I'll fill you and the older brat in as soon as I get my brief yelling done by King Vegeta..". Bardock sped toward the King, most likely the King would be impatient.

" Oh-" Kakorrot began, only to watch his father speed down the hall.
"-kay...now what?" He said to himself, disappointed only because he had no idea what was going on.
Shrugging his shoulders, he strolled into Dr. Squash’s room and slowly made his way over to Vegeta's bed side.
Dr. Squash had happened to left the room, quickly on an errand to retrieve some items.
"Greetings my Prince," Kakorrot whispered, looking down glumly at the unconscious Vegeta.

Back in the throne room..

Bardock stepped into King Vegeta's throne room and sighed waiting for King Vegeta's ranting session.

King Vegeta growled "WELL.. Bardock? How's my Brat?!" "Is he Cured?!" "He better BE!" "I won't have MY SON sit on the throne SICK!" "WHERE WAS HE AND WHERE DID HE GO?!"

Bardock said "Well Sire...He's kind of Sick..still.." "And he's in Dr. Squash's office. And He left by himself for a barren planet!"

King Vegeta took a few seconds to relieve the moment and t hen yelled at the top of his lungs "WHAT?!!" "Bardock you are dismissed, Go Now.."


Bardock growled as he went out and said to himself "That went worse than I thought it would.." Now he'd go back to find Kakkarot and Raditz.

In Dr. Squash’s lab, Vegeta’s eyes still remained closed as he struggled in his sleep, with little sweatdrops rolling down his face, stuck in a bad flashback..

"He's disgusting!"
"He's so pathetic, look at him squirm!"
"Pathetic little monkey! Haha!"

Vegeta growled, and then hissed as his arms reached out, digging tightly around the closest person around which happened to be Kakkarot at the time, however he was doing this unknowingly. Vegeta began to strangle Kakkarot thinking that he had to do with the bad thoughts. He yelled “Shut UP! I’ll KILL YOU!” as blood came out of his nose, and his eyes flickered, and then he bared his fangs as he unknowingly tightened his grip on Kakkarot’s neck.

Kakkarot screamed as Vegeta strangled him “Somebody..Help..ME!!”. It was then Vegeta’s grip became tighter on Kakkarot’s neck and Kakkarot gagged. Soon blood began to form around Vegeta’s fingertips and Kakkarot felt short of breath, as his whole world became blurry. Kakkarot thought “He’s going to kill me!”, and if he tried to attack Vegeta, Vegeta would probably attack him back...

Bardock had just walked out of King Vegeta's throne room and headed back to Dr. Squash's lab to check on Prince Vegeta, and as he flew closer.. he heard chocking noises and ran in there "Oh Damnit, Not Now Prince Vegeta!" He ran into the room only to see Prince Vegeta's arms around Kakkarot's neck and yelled to calm Prince Vegeta down "Snap out of it, Prince Vegeta!" "If He attacked, and tried to get his grip off Kakkaroto, he could attack both of them." "Instead he yelled to Kakkaroto "Son, He's having a nightmare, Calm him down!" "It worked the first time!"

Kakkarot managed to choke out these words as Vegeta was still choking him, trying to listen to his father’s words without going unconscious again “Al..right” but started to fear for the worst as his eyes widened as Vegeta began to convulse. Kakkarot tried to calm Vegeta down with his voice and said “Vegeta..Calm..Down..It’s... Al..right..I’m..here..to..help.you. Vegeta heard these words, but Kakkarot was still gasping for breath, however Vegeta calmed down a bit still having a firm grasp on Kakkarot’s neck, as he turned to his father trying to say ‘Father get him off.. before.. he acts..up..again..”. His face started to turn blue from lack of air.

Bardock quickly placed his hands on Vegeta’s hands and started to pull them off saying in a semi-calm voice “Vegeta, Let go of Kakkarot.. We are only here to help”

However Vegeta’s reaction to this was that he growled, and chomped down hard on Bardock’s shoulder releasing his grip on Kakkarot’s neck..

As Bardock felt his son dropping from Vegeta's hands, then he felt a large pain in his shoulder, Vegeta had just bit him..hard and it hurt. Bardock hissed as the pain from Vegeta's fangs hurt.

Bardock held out his hand, he would have to hurt Prince Vegeta if that meant him to stop biting him. Bardock held out his other arm still hurting from the last attack on him and said in a slow but angry tone "Prince Vegeta..You left me no choice but to attack you!" Bardock formed a slightly powerful blast in his left arm and threw it at Vegeta.

Vegeta fell backwards from the blast striking him in the head, he slumped over on the other side of the bed and onto the floor, landing hard against the wall. He blinked several times before coming to his senses, his eyes darting about as he realized that he was covered in blood.

"What...is going on...what's...happening to...me?" He asked, his eyes moist as he clutched his head, feeling so lost and uncontrolled that he screamed in anger and hopelessness, feeling so pathetic he wish some one would just kill him as he suddenly began to cry.

Bardock walked over to Vegeta and picked him up by the shirt, debating whatever he should yell at how pathetic he was or at least calm him down. Bardock growled “Listen to me, Prince Vegeta..” “What the HELL are you THINKING?!”. Bardock said this half growling, half calmly.

" So now your going to pity me?..." Vegeta said slowly, drawing his hands away as he looked up at Bardocks hand, unsure if he should take it or not.
" Just go...I could attack you again...besides...you should be telling me how pathetic I am right now...that you're disgusted to have a Prince like me...LOOK AT ME! I'm a DISGRACE!" Vegeta yelled, slapping Bardock’s hand away as he shook in anger, trying hard to keep the tears from spilling from his sore eyes.
"You should have just left me be...you should have just left me alone...to die out there...alone..." Vegeta whispered his eyes distant as he slumped further down the wall in despair.

After the whole argument between Bardock and Vegeta, Kakkarot wondered what would happen next.. as he suddenly heard yelling outside the door.. King Vegeta and a few guards demanded to be let into the lab..


Another cliffhanger.

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