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Reviews for Moments In A Life

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Macha on July 21, 2004
    It was interesting to see Trunks way of thinking through this little fiasco.

    Hmmm, Goku was willing to let the first confrontation go, but wants to help Vegeta get ready for the second round. I wonder what his motives are. If it's other than sex that is.

    Vegeta with a full tummy and falling a sleep. I would think, "How cute," under different circumstances.
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  • From ANON - chayron on July 21, 2004
    Yeah! I said full of hope) No) Now let's hope Vegeta gets better! (From what i have read it seems that he is moving to a better state.
    I always wonder...how do you manage to write so fast..? I think i have seen one your chapter which was done in 20 minutes and it was a really good chapter... Correct me if i confused you with someone else, but i think it was you. Yeah... ;) Waiting for next chapter!
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  • From jaygoose on July 21, 2004
    You know I didn't even notice that that chapter was a bit short. I must be tired. I am a busy girl lately...Hmm...what to do say...Oh Trunks...I'm feeling sorry for the poor kid. I like totally forgot that he lost his mom. *sobs*
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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on July 21, 2004
    Vegeta is in trouble! oh no!
    this fic has got so much going on.

    I know the affair is a two way street...but it isn't Vegeta's fault that Krillen tried to kill himself. I know 18 is angry, I would be too and I would probably do the same thing she is doing...well maybe not while my husband is in the hospital.

    but the chapter b4 this one had an awesome lemon, and I loved it so much...it was very very good. *drools*

    and I thought that maybe bad things were not going to happen and Goku might wake up next to Vegeta...boy was I completely wrong!

    and that annoying ass reporter with the sunglasses was yammering on about it.--LoL glad to see he made an appearence on the scene. He is probably wondering where the 'great' Mr. Satan is, so he can stop the fight.

    they were almost literally on top of the Namek, and Piccolo jumped back and squawked an unmanly yelp--lmao...oh gosh that is sooo funny.

    Well I am awaiting the next chapter...*bites nails* I wonder what is going to happen?

    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 18, 2004
    whoa...this story is...wow. The Vegeta and Goku lemon...superb, of course. But then Krillin trying to kill himself and Eighteen going psycho...and Trunks and Goten and Gohan and everything. So good! I love this! And loved how Seventeen was there for support...even though Eighteen was trying to end Veggie. Great attention to detail. Me likey!
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 18, 2004
    Aahhhhhhh.... Chaos. I thought a couple of chapters back Krillin was "okay" with Vegeta and Goku. Now I see that the relief, (or whatever it was he was feeling) had totally different consequences than what I thought it would lead to. Now I have to say "Idiot," because of course, I don't believe that was the best thing for the short bald one to do. Of course, I am not him.

    I am glad the only interfernce Goku gave was to take them someplace else. As 18 said gh, gh, I don't think it is over. I hope Vegeta wants to strengthen up, but he seems to be an emotional wreck and I don't know if he will continue to punish himself this way, or find a reason to live. Because for a sayian to stop eating and stop training and then bring disater on themselves is almost the same thing as Krillin cutting his viens. Stupid and suicidal.

    Over all, (even with all of my over opinionatedness) I liked the chapter.

    I had to laugh at Goku's stating of the obvious and Piccolos unmanly scream.
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  • From chayron on July 18, 2004
    This is a great story (like most of your stories ;'s 's dark, breathtaking and addictive but at the same time full of hope.
    You are one of my favourite authors. Waiting for next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 17, 2004
    Yay! More updates.
    I wonder what will happen next.

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  • From ANON - Macha on July 14, 2004
    *puts bib on because I am drooling* Oh, that was good. *stares off for a moment* hehe, ah, that was worth the wait. So, if this was/is suppose to be "just sex" where do they go from here? There are still a whole bunch of questions that have been brought up but haven't been answered by the Prince so far.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 14, 2004

    That was great!


    Vegeta wanted to yell at him for knowing what to do? -LOL Hmm. Goku does have many talents.


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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on July 06, 2004
    *sobs* This is just too emotional for me.
    It was a great chappie.
    I really feel bad for everyone...poor Trunks he keeps walking in on that kind of stuff...and his dad is just out there, not really there for him. And Krillen I wonder what Trunks was yelling about. Vegeta...it is just so sad he said he hated her and *Sobs* I don't think he killed her...but I guess I'll have to wait and see. And he cried!
    I really can't wait to read more.
    I'm glad the father wasn't Yamcha, hehe...I figured Vegeta would kill him if it was Yamcha.
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 05, 2004
    Yep, you summed it up, angst. I did a very good job writing it to. It has even made me frustrated. I certainly hope that Trunks has now learned the lesson of knocking on his father's bedroom door. I think I would have learned the first time.

    Well, it would seem that Goku knows Vegeta very well. Well enough to know that he shouldn't use his IT because Veget still had some unfinished trama going on.

    It really makes me sad to see stories were the last thing you said to a person you love wasn't "I Love You." It reminds me again to do so, often. It's one of those things that hits me in the gut. I am feeling very sorry for Vegeta right now. Very proud of Goku for sticking it out on the line for the unreasonable sayian also.


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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 05, 2004

    Angst. But at least Vegeta learned to cry. He has to let his sadness out.


    Looking forward to the next chapter.


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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 02, 2004
    I am so confused now...There! Are you happy now. What the hell is going on...come on, you can tell me...no one else has to know that I know...Please? Fine! Keep your secrets! I have ways of making you talk! Muhahhaahhahaaaa! *cough*
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  • From Spacefille on July 02, 2004
    I read the Trunks' point of view stuff in Chapter 2 with great amusement.

    ((“Hey, my Mom died, I think my father might have killed her and now he’s fucking your other best friend, do you think you could stop training the kid and come back to handle this problem for me?”))

    *dies laughing* Aha! XD You're so funny.

    ((Naked. Krillin. Naked. Vegeta. Fucking him.
    Vegeta was fucking Krillin.
    Unbelievable.))

    Un-fucking-believeable? ;)

    Awww... did he kill Bulma? Vegeta is very dangerous in this fic.

    Wee! Alright, three chapters down... I must sleep now because I work in a few hours. O_o Thanks again, I'll read more of this lovely fic later! :)

    (P.S. - Goku is sexy... it's just that Vegeta is sexy-er... godlike. Er. Yeesh.)

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