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Reviews for Moments In A Life

By : CardDragonBall

From ANON - jenno on September 20, 2010
i totally thought vegeta was angry when goku returned to the hyp. room because the minutes it took him to bo see pikolo and chichi were months in the chamber for vegeta...
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From ANON - lina on October 10, 2004
it was a great story , i hope you will write a sequel .love your work
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From ANON - macha on August 31, 2004
I really liked the part when 18 said that she hadn't lied about loving him forever. *Sigh* I do think Krillin got off easy though. Hmmm, I wonder how many 'honey dos' he is going to have to perform to make up for this. (I am not certain there is really any amount he can do to make up for it though.)

Well, it has to be nice to live in DBZ land and know for certain that your loved ones can see you from heaven.

Hmmm, I think I know what Goku was going to say/ask, but I am not absolutely certain.

hehe, Nice going on Trunks' and Goten's parts. I think I would have off loaded Bra in a very similar matter. I am not heartless, mind you, but diaper changing, if I don't have to, Ewwww!
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From ANON - Webtester01 on August 31, 2004
That was good.

More.
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From ANON - maria on August 29, 2004
why did bulma die and did she have AIDS.and did vegeta have it too.i meant to ask you thiforefore.can't wait to rread more..oh and is trunks and goten doing the same thing as goku and vegeta..so many quest........maria
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From ANON - En4cerMax on August 28, 2004
This is turning out to be a really good story. I like Ch:21. It was filled with anger, compassion, understanding, and at the end, a new outlook on life for our Prince Vegeta. Goku and Vegeta; what a pair
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From ANON - macha on August 28, 2004
*blink.....blink* Wow and ouch. I think I have way too much residual angst going on in my head from reading this chapter. All that thought and emotion processing, and it isn't even really mine to process. And if I feel that way about it, someone who is outside looking in, how the heck could I possibly know what it REALLY feels like, being on the inside? I have know idea what it would be like to be in Vegeta's shoes right now. Nor Goku's, who knows or at least feels that he is going to be the one to 'deal' with whatever happens because of this...this fiasco.

Ah, well, even angry, the Prince is somewhat concide: go: going after the lube and all. hehe (?)

My favorit line, or a close approximation.... 'How did Vegeta always managed to look like he was just coming out of a Porn flick' hehe. Yeah, he does, doesn't he. mmmmmmmmmmm *drools*
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From ANON - FireFly on August 27, 2004
Oh, that's cruel! No lemon?! *shakes fist* I am mildly outraged, yet still satisfied with yet another great chapter..... But where the lemon at? *looks around and only sees ChiChi holding a baby*
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From ANON - macha on August 23, 2004
Oh myell,ell, I am glad Vegeta and Goku spent all that time in the time chamber. Did wonders for the Prince's stamina in a fight. I have no idea to the outcome of Krillian's and 18's private fight. I don't know what I should hope for either.

Well, I kind of guessed about the possibility of Bra being Vegeta's daughter when the little girl felt so comfortable with him in the park. Don't know many anime ppl who would be so trusting of him. I have a feeling it has something to with scent and genetics. But now, what is he going to do? Just another bit of drama for this story. What a twist.

r Trr Trunks. And what WAS Bulma doing since it is so very obbvious she wasn't testing her daughter for who the father was. Hmmmm, maybe she did know, but had very strange reasons for not telling?

Oh, and I am all for the idea of a second answer to sayian problems. *gets popcorn and sits to watch the strip show.*
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From ANON - macha on August 10, 2004
I feel bad for reading your story at your site, because then I don't leave anything here for other ppl to reference.

*shrugs* Well, ou Dou DO mind, I hope you'll tell me. (hehe, going to go check you site now)
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From ANON - chayron on July 25, 2004
Oh... I liked this chapter very much! Goku and his little inducement which turned against him ;) And Krillin with 18, yeah, that was deep and sad but promising. Thanks focredcredible chapter! Write more! ;)
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From ANON - Webtester01 on July 24, 2004
Oh Krillin, poor fool. *rolls eyes*

Glad that Vegeta is getting over his depression. Also it looks like Goku is falling into the same trap that Krillin fell victim to. Or maybe Vegeta will become a 'better' person.

I am interested in seeing how you develop the scenarios between the characters further.

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From ANON - Macha on July 24, 2004
So, back to the resesitation(spelling) I don't think I will be calling Vegeta or Goku to do the job for a while. I don't think it would turn out well. *shakes head*

That was soooo like the Prince. Stuborn ass. Well, Goku made the 'rules' now he has to live by them. Silly Goku, did he think that Vegeta wouldn't notice him doing 'that' in the shower?

Hm, I don't know if the guardian or Piccolo would actually care. I wouldn't want to take the chance of being kicked out though. The time chamber has it's usefullness.

I really, really hope things work out for Krillin and 18. Don't know how it's going to happen, but I certainly hope it does.
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From ANON - jaygoose on July 24, 2004
Oh I loved the scene with Krillin and Eighteen. It make me feel so bad for almost totally ignoring them in my fic. It was so emotional. *sobs*

But I can not believe you did that to me at the end of this one. That was just so mean...but I guess that I have written aead ead enough smut for the time being...but Vegeta was just being ry mey mean there. Poor Goku...
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From ANON - Webtester01 on July 21, 2004
Good. Vegeta's going to recover. *smiles>

It looks like my ancient history fic is going to be longer than I thought.

I don't think us authors always end where we want to.

Almost finished with chapter 13, but that as been delayed with work on my website.

http://www.authorgrid.com

Anyway, looking forward to more.

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