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Reviews for Nightmare

By : nomdeplume
  • From alleycat88 on December 31, 2007
    roy is such a sweetie! And I laughed at alphonse beig an alchy! along with Riza! Poor Ed...he will probably never be the same....unless Roy talks about alchemy wth him 24/7...but then it wouldn't be as fun would it? ;)
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  • From AliceMina on December 29, 2007
    I like the story. I hope you keep writing. This one has a lot going for it.
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  • From yeagerbomb on December 27, 2007
    no! why was that the end?? i'm irritated now! please update soon!!! i love this so far.
    'you are a pyromaniac.'
    'i will not deny it.'
    that part was great. hope to see more soon!!!~
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  • From Velvetina on December 27, 2007
    **Nods** Yep there are some amazing writers out there. I'm enjoying discovering them all.

    I really liked this chapter. I could totally see Ed's panic as he realised that the doctor he normally had wouldn't be the one checking him, that moment just struck a chord with me because I think it would be a very real thing to happen. And I love thet Roy distracted him by asking him that question, the Colonel is such a sweetie really! :-D.

    Poor Al! The interaction between him and Riza was really enjoyable and I loved the line abotu how he was afraid of her when he was metal and yet not scared when she could actually hurt him, it made me grin.

    I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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  • From Loquora on December 27, 2007
    Ohhhh... I feel so bad for Ed. He really needs a hug, more than anyone I have ever known. I like the way it's written. But boy, I hope it all turns out well in the end. Thank you for the story!
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  • From ANON - bloody_rose on December 26, 2007
    Oh that so beautifully sad. Keeping going I want to see if Ed will get better and Just imageing Roy crying is so heart braking . WWWAHHH DON T CRY ROY ITLL BE OK!!!!
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  • From Velvetina on December 22, 2007
    Holy hell this is gripping. I'm totally and utterly captured by this story. I've only recntly discovered the joys of FMA and so am catching up on the good fiction on it and this fic is jumping right up to the top of my list. I love the way you portray the characters and poor poor Ed, I just want to hug him... though maybe not the best idea at the moment lol. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on December 21, 2007
    That's all we get? You tease!
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  • From ANON - Evermist on December 21, 2007
    Ne, so short, but still good. *huggles Ed* It's okay, it'll get better now. *squeeze* >.
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  • From alleycat88 on December 21, 2007
    Poor Roy. He feels so responsible for what happened to Ed. and Ed is still so traumatized...which is perfectly understandable. Good update sweetie! thanks!
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  • From yeagerbomb on December 21, 2007
    aaauuugh!! so short! *cries* no faaaaiir!! great story so far, i really can't wait for more! oh, roy... so protective.~
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on December 21, 2007
    wow. intense. brutal. Poor Ed really suffered at Bradley's hand. T_T This is a fantastic blending of canon and AU! just awesome! I read this a while back on your LJ and am so glad you posted it here. I probably didn't leave a comment there 'cause I'm lazy like that. It's weird but I like reading stuff here on aff more than I do on LJ. no idea why. Anyway, this is really good and can't wait to read more! Hooray for Roy rescuing Ed!! :)
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Ivy on December 20, 2007
    Definitely a worthwhile story to read! Even though Ed torture makes me sad, I feels it's a great idea to use it as an intermediate for Roy to get close to Ed. Can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Orion117 on December 20, 2007
    Oh, poor Ed. The saddest thing was watching him chase Al away because he didn't dare believe that it was really Al. I liked the way you worked Mustang's battle with the Fuhrer into your alternate take on the story. A good start that left me wanting more!
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  • From ANON - MaryLover on December 20, 2007
    Hi dear, I told you I was following your next works from the very beginning and tada! here I am, I looked for this one on ff but didn't find it, so I leave you my review here till you begin on the other site.
    I like it, a promising fic and a promising plot. Now I wonder why you like Hohenheim so much that have him here again, don't worry I kind of like him too. And it seems Ed's still trusting Mustang, I want to know how they'll both manage to have a life after what happened... mainly Ed.
    And over all, what happened to the other homunculi, and the Gate, and... are you intending to show that part where Riza's taking care of Mustang? uhm... an 'eventually RoyEd in your summary could suggest so many possibility until they'll finally end together... sighs

    The end of a nightmare? haha! let me laugh... your fic's title is not there for just one chapter... bye
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