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By : Aestas

From ANON - wow! on January 25, 2011
that lemon was hot! can't wait for Trowa to get his turn. very well written. thanks!
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From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2011
Love it! But now I'm so very curious...what is Quatre's secret fetish? Have you decided yet? Can you give us a hint? Ahh I'm excited for the sex scene and the plot!
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From shinigamiinochi on January 24, 2011
Yeeeees, Duo and bondage! The BEST!
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From CeeCee on January 24, 2011
*wiggles eyebrows* When life throws Aestas lemons, Aestas makes Gundam smut!

I love the tiny gestures, like Trowa rubbing up against Quatre when he helped with the groceries. Reminds you of a cat purring to be petted only until it's sick of the contact, but it still wants the attention. I enjoyed Quat's reflections of Trowa's solitude and how he realizes that Trowa actually needs them now, even if he won't admit it out loud. You can see little things slipping through, like Trowa becoming more affectionate. It's almost a shame that he will have to take that away soon, and that you wonder how much he will change when he comes back.

I understand about real life sometimes affecting your fic. I've been blocked lately, wondering if my older stories will still hold up to updates if I can't get back into the groove, when I've been so distracted lately. But too much time on the PC isn't healthy, either, so at times, my fic gets in the way of real life, too, when I can't afford for it to. It happens. Write when the urge hits you, but hopefully everything else you're dealing with untangles itself.
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From Ayana on January 16, 2011
dear I loved the first story and now the second..you have to continue if not for anyone else but yourself and me ^-^
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From zekesbabe on December 27, 2010
Heya.

I hadn't realised you'd added chapter 2 until I came hunting down one of your other fics. I'm so mad I missed it! And I've been checking every single day as well! I can imagine the difficulties of assuming a role and think that you've captured it perfectly. And that Trowa has asked them to give him a few days either side of the mission to assume character and then shed the qualities of the role...that's good common sense that not many people think about. I'm really pleased with the way you write (sounds pompous doesn't it!?) and love the thought you seem to give everything. I am also really looking forward to the next update which I hope won't be too far away as you updated the second chapter a fair while ago. *hopes it's later today!*

Also, not that you need one...it's more of a ruse by me to beg for chapters as soon as you've written them...if you want someone just to look over your work I would be happy to volunteer. Lol! As I say, I don't expect you to say yes to this.

Zx
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From ANON - Djargo on December 14, 2010
Amazing! I'll try but I don't think I have sufficient enough words to describe how wonderful and taunt this chapter was. The further I read the more I felt myself tensing with anticipation like I was waiting for something to happen.
I especially got a shiver as I read Trowa's reaction as he watched Duo and Quatre. With just those few lines, the whole tone of the chapter changed. You could feel his reactions weren't all his own. The fact that,at first, he didn't realize his "hunter" persona was in play was also disturbing. Obviously it was to Trowa to since he felt the need to "cleanse" himself with scalding water.
I can see now why he was concerned he could hurt Quatre or Duo. He was afraid the darker aspects of his personas would come to the fore when he wasn't in complete control. If you can't tell by the rambling review, I really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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From ANON - originalceenote on December 13, 2010
The second chapter was intense and had me hanging and leaning into my monitor, skimming back over the paragraphs to make sure I didn't miss anything. So yeah, I enjoyed it. There is this...awesome feeling of impending disaster, even doom, in this chapter, this heady anticipation that these boys, all three of them, are about to cross a boundary that won't let them come all the way back unscathed. You hope they'll be stronger for it, closer for it, better able to understand each other more deeply, but it makes your stomach knot thinking about the darkness that will bloom and swell before the light breaks through. Trowa running from them and trying to exorcise the dark fragment, the "hunter" inside him, was very telling, especially when he climbed into a blazing hot shower, no doubt to purify, or even punish himself. Well done. I can't just review this and say "OMG, that was so cool! Gimme more!" and make googoo eyes, because I know it's involved, complicated, painstaking writing, and that kind takes a lot out of a person. But I'm looking forward to the updates, and always setting them aside for when I have the time to enjoy them without interruption.
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From shinigamiinochi on November 29, 2010
YES! *punches the air* I love this story ^_^ And I'm totally ok with future, angsty darkness. And I also totally approve of Trowa and Quatre ganging up on Duo.
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From Angelkitty7888 on November 26, 2010
YAY!!!! you're back!!! *happy dance* i can't wait until you post more!! and you said you couldn't write Heero and Wufei! i think you are doing splededly on this one :) angst and heaviness will make this even better i think!!

i like your bunker :) it is indeed very Trowa and demonstrates his loyalty and love of his friends :) and i can completely picture him doing that in the mornings!! kinda like i assume Tai Chi would be a rutine for Wufei... and i certainly hope you are going to post that lovely scene you've built up in the teasing from this chapter!!
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From ANON - OriginalCeenote on November 26, 2010
Bring on the angst. I love dark fic as much as I love dark chocolate, as long as its well plotted, and as long as there's a vestige of hope in the story that makes you see the characters are strong enough to deal with that's thrown at them. You always bring that to the table, along with some of the best man smut ever. I loved this first chapter. The breakfast scene was very cute, as well as Duo and Quat peeking at Trowa's morning routine and trying not to get caught. It gave me the subtle reminder that Trowa still hides a lot of himself from his loves, and that they're still tiptoing around him in some ways, not wanting to drive him away. But it's ironic, because you see a part of him almost wants to push them away to protect them. The "food enough for four" line made me say "Ooooooo... dang, Trowa!" It's like he's buying a life insurance policy for his loved ones, except it's a safehouse.

I like the love scene. It's nice to see them nudge him a little, as well as to see Trowa give in. Definitely brings to mind the triple kiss from your first story, and makes me have to wipe the fog and drool off my PC screen...*koff* I just love this fic. I do.
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From ANON - Djargo on November 25, 2010
Yes!.*does happy dance* I didn't think you were suppose to receive a present for Thanksgiving yet here one is.

This was SO good. That was quite the morning work out reward. Even though it was sexy,it was also about Duo and Quatre making Trowa comfortable with their intimacy. All warm and fuzzy without being sappy.
I laughed out loud at Wufei's zinger about Heero's stamina. Good to see the dragon has not lost his bite though he should've realized that it would only push Duo to have the last say^_^. Only Duo would take conversation to that level of intimate details.
Though Trowa's precautions were sobering it was nice to see how he reassured his lovers of his commitment to them by reaffiming his plans to quit. I also like how this chapter showed the closeness among the friends. Considering the length and depth of Trowa's cover,he's going to need all the strength he can draw from these connections. I look forward to seeing your take on how this dynamic effects his relationship with Duo and Quatre..
I can take dark and angsty so I look forward to upcoming chapters.
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From zekesbabe on November 25, 2010
You realise of course that I will be coming online every single day specifically to check on the status on this fic? I'm as bad as any persistant fan girl when it comes to my favourite stories and most of your stories are in my top ten list! I like the detail you put in this and...I don't know...something about the way you write just captivates me. It's always in character and sometimes when it comes to threesomes/moresomes and such like it can come out very...childish. You don't do that. Perhaps that's what pulls me in. Anyway, make sure you update this regularly and bring on your dark themes. The darker it is the more I love the story.

Zx
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