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Reviews for A King With Chaos

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on July 21, 2004
    Vegeta and Kakarott's kids are: Vegeta and Goten! um..at least that is what I think.
    *sobs* I have missed so much...please forgive me!!!!
    Anyway great stuff! I love this ficcie, it is sooooooooo hilarious.
    Poor Goku...had to have the bad sex :( aww I hope it gets better for him...but gosh that was all so funny.
    And Presta she is just great in this fic...well everyone is great and I love the characters. how original each one is and all the witty comebacks that they seem to have.
    But now I am very interested about the set of twins that has shown up.
    ^.*
    -MB-
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 20, 2004
    I guess that could be aranged! *shakes head and thinks to self* (should have known better)

    *covers eyes with hands* Don't tell me Goten and lil' Geta are going to have to have a sex talk with Vegeta and Kakarott. About how to do it with girls. (I know someone has too.) Poor Kakarott.

    Well, although I could use the points, I haven't got a clue as to who the other twins are. (unless it's this verse's version of your twins, doesn't seem right though)

    I am glad that Gohan is going to be able to prove himself capable. I found Cardac's take on Presta kind of funny. (blonde haired bitch)

    And yes, I am very happy that sayiaman doesn't exsist here. This is good. *nods head*

    I found Gohan dragging Cardac off in the after coments funny. hehe
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 20, 2004

    Presta giving Caradoc ideas. That's a laugh. If Caradoc follows through with Presta's suggestion, Gohan is in for one heck of a ride. *grin*


    As far as guessing who one of the mystery people are, I would say that one of them is a versioin of Trunks.


    Keep it up!


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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 20, 2004
    Ahey hey the King and Kakarot's kids? I am so lame when it comes to guessing.


    Oh you don't know what I'm talking about do you...hmm...*grins evilly* I guess I'll just have to hold on to the Raditz and Cell chapter until you figure it out. Heh Heh...
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  • From ANON - Lenora on July 20, 2004
    There can't be TWO sets of the annoying...ly adorable *grins at a glaring Goten* twins can there? if there is...holy fuck. i can't wait to see the explination for that one. :D trunks and i will calmly play cards while we try and figure out what insanity the twins have caused this time. :D
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  • From ANON - Lenora on July 19, 2004
    Hey! Come back here! *runs after her to get answers, slows, falls over and dies. Trunks shows up, pokes her in the eye and look, she's awake!* hehehehehehe i'm tired and excited because i got to read this and now i'm tired again. hmm...you're not telling about gohan and caradoc...now i have to know!!!

    AND WHO THE HELL IS THAT MYSTERIOUS GUY!!!!! more! *puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 18, 2004
    *Card starts breathing agian.* "Finally!" *blushes* I am NEVER doing that again. I want to know what sayian you want me to call on to recesitate you the next time you decide to fall over dead. (seriously) And with the work load you have, I expect that you are going to need it (talking about putting up your site, Yay!)

    I found a LOT of humor in this chapter. LOL green and pink Vegeta rabbit, and twin squirles, and pudding. I wonder if Kakarott would have complained so much if it was chocolate pudding. Hmmmm? *thinks about the possiblities*

    Ah, more curious interaction between Cordac (I don't think I spelled that right) and Gohan. Gohan and Naked ppl. LOL, interesting phylosophy (once agian, spelling is bad). I wonder when Gohan is going to have to prove he is capable of defending himself, if he wants.

    Oh, Presta, *shakes head* you wish for life to be exciting. Be careful what you ask for dear.

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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 18, 2004

    Gohan subconsiously licking his lips in that compromising position? LOL I really laughed when Presta showed up. That had to be a Kodak moment. Gohan won't necessarilly be angry at his brothers if Caradoc gets Gohan to... Anyway Presta's 'don't mind me' attude was funny.


    I wonder what the twins messed up this time. Looking forward to finding out. Keep up the talented writing!


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  • From jaygoose on July 17, 2004
    So this was your revenge right? Who the hell is the tall kid. I want to know! And the Caradoc/Gohan thing is so hilarious. I can't wait!
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  • From ANON - EleneK on July 14, 2004
    And yet there is still that pesky deadline. Do the twins know about that? Gohan/Caradoc? Still undecided about that yet. Should be interesting though. Does Gohan really need Presta to protect him (he does train with Goku, Vegeta, Piccolo, and his brothers) or does Presta just not have confidence in his abilities to protect himself? Or is she speaking of Emotional pain instead of physical pain?

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  • From ANON - Macha on July 14, 2004
    *quirks an eye brow* I am really not certain what to think of the interaction between Gohan and Cardoc. I am somewhat surprised that Cardoc isn't trying to jump his bones, but *shrugs*.....

    Those twins have horrible since of timing. I am surprised that lil' Geta didn't faint when they found them in that position. Just because they aren't really his parents maybe?

    Hehe, drink Kakarott. Drink it up!

    Hmmmm, Presta, what's she thinking?
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 14, 2004
    Hmm...Gohan is asking for it isn't he? And if Presta is so worried about Gohan than she should be there, instead of running around stinking up a storm.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 14, 2004

    Kaki drank the hormone therapy. *grins*


    Presta is so protective of Gohan. -Nice


    I wonder what Caradoc is up to in regards to Gohan. *smirks*


    More please!


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  • From ANON - Lenora on July 14, 2004
    So i sense a Caradoc/Gohan pairing coming up??? it would be intresting and even extremely funny. i can't wait for the next chapter. more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lenora on July 13, 2004
    *pout* i'm really disliking aff.net lately. it's being mean. but keep going card, while i sit and play speed with Trunks. psst...presta gave me the key before she left so goten would be able to go along. so trunks and i have come to an understanding, he'll sit and play cards with me mon-thurs and he can go home on the weekends. :D aren't i so nice. heehehe keep going!!!
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