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Reviews for A King With Chaos

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - Elenek on July 09, 2004
    Is Caradock a good guy or a bad guy? What did he mean by a price? How's he gonna handle Gohan being able to handle his own in a fight? Especially since Gohan does have a special trick. YOU'RE giving Gohan a personality? *falls out of chair and dies* I guess one of our favorite boys is having twins. And even if he's not, I guess that means that Caradock is the back up plan? *shudder* Poor Duke, you need to give the bakayaro a name. -El-
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 09, 2004

    Another wonderful chapter.


    I could be wrong, but there seems to be some chemistry between Caradoc and Gohan.


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  • From ANON - Lenora on July 08, 2004
    Ya know, i was thinking that it would be extremly funny if Presta bit Gohan. Make him the submissive partner in the relationship. but then i was thinking that Presta and Caradoc would be intresting. anyway, loved the first chapter. cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Macha on July 03, 2004
    Yeah, another story! Woot!

    Well, this one has hardly started. I am going to be very interested in what Cardoc's place in the whole thing is. I would have to agree with him though, having your kneecap removed isn't conducive to sex.

    Now, Vegeta and the royal septer. Hmm, I thought for a moment that Kaki was going to be sucking on it. Of course, the way Vegeta was discribing the whole incident(and it was a very detailed discription) and what he was going to do about it I don't think he wanted to be in that kind of prementment with whom ever he was cussing about.


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  • From ANON - Mechanical Butterfly on July 03, 2004
    I love the title. ^_^

    I kinda like Kakarott among Kings too.

    *gasp* Why did they throw Caradoc (love that name) out..let him fend for his self like that?
    I love this ficcie so far. I do wonder what is going to happen with the whole heir thing.
    And are Geta and Goten going to try and power up Caradoc?
    So many quest tha that will be answered sooner or later.
    And nice semi lemon too. ^_~
    ^.*
    -MB-

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  • From ANON - EleneK on July 02, 2004
    Tleftleft Gohan with Caradock? No "Gohan, come meet Grandpa." Instead, theaveeave Gohan with the asshole who hates Vegeta and probably Kakarrot as well. I'm thinking that was not the wisest decision that Goten and Vegeta ever made. And Caradock decides that he wants to talk to Gohan right off the bat without even knowing who these people are? What does he want to talk about? I have a couple of ideas but I'll wait to see if they're right. Something tells me that Gohan is not going to like the conversation and I'm looking forward to Caradock finding out that Gohan can fight and has been involved in a serious one more than once. I'm also looking forward to Gohan loosing some of his prissiness and getting even more in touch with his saiyan side. Should be ebtertaining.

    Do people want to kill Goku becaus is is keeping Vegeta from producing children or as a way of getting to Vegeta (Kings have enemies) What did this duke do to poff off Vegeta so badly?


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  • From ANON - Ginia on July 02, 2004
    Off to a NICE start with this one - and my favorite flavor too!
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on July 02, 2004
    Interesting...I'm not entirely sure yet...but I make just like Caradoc. (that's spelled right, right?)
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on July 02, 2004

    It was one thing to prove a point, it was another to drive it home by leaving him in this world that stank like sweat and sex and was filled to the brim with dirty leering (larger) Saiyans. -LOL Cardoc got what he deserved.


    Mocked him now, for the past eight years, called him “his highness Caradoc” but they stopped thinking they could use him as a punching bag. Kept theirtanctance because a day didn’t pass when he didn’t have his trusty knives with him. Bardock told him not to cut off any more kneecaps, but he could do whatever else was necessary to protect himself. Cutting off kneecaps? *shudders* He is ruthless.


    Twins, a Super Saiyan and something else that was taking in the sight of the camp like he had never seen anything quite as unreal. A priss, how unusual. -*snickers* Looks like Cardoc is getting ideas... Watch out Gohan.


    “This is my friend, Presta,” pointed at the female Super Saiyan that was stinking like a ‘come and fuck me’ sign. Moving like someone had already done the job, but she hadn’t taken to it. -LOL Oh, PresI thI thought the 'come and ...' sign was funny. Hmm. I guess someone did a good job.


    Which left him with the twins and the priss-boy who was running his hands through his hair and wagging his tail behind him in nervous swishes. He smelled odd. It was hard to tell, anymore, but the kid could have been a half-breed. -*chuckles* I can just picture Gohan's behaviour.


    He watched them walk up to Bardock and shake his hand and all of them were invited back into the tent where the Super Saiyan girl glowed like a lightbulb and illuminated it from the inside out. LOL lighbulb. Loved that. *dies laughing*


    Then he walked away from him, and left the kid to figure out if he wanted to follow or not. By the looks of him with his pretty smooth skin and swishy nervous tail, he hadn’t been in a decent fight in his life. Immediate punching-bag pick for the camp. -Hmm. Pretty??? *narrows eyes at Cardoc* Punching bag you say? Maybe it will be a good learning experience for him. Then again. *sighs*


    Keep it up.


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  • From ANON - angry monkey on July 02, 2004
    Cool. Sweet title.
    I see Caradoc is going to be in this more then. Will the twins see Vegeta and Kakarot soon? (Another episode of the side effect psycodelic-ness of the hormone therapy!?)
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