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By : nomdeplume
  • From ANON - nyves on November 21, 2008
    Thank you, this was a really great story. Thank you so much for writing it!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on November 21, 2008
    Oh, and this is StaightCougar on livejournal by the way!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on November 21, 2008
    I wasn't expecting this to have such a lovely ending! I enjoyed how Ed was different but the same basic person.

    Hooray for human Wrath! I think WinryXWrath is one of my new OTP's now! I think using Gluttony and his power to basically make stones to create all those changes was a good plot device!

    *Happy feelings*

    I don't suppose I could pester you for the possiblility of and side sotires to this could I? Maybe of Winry and Wrath? *bats eyes at you, chases you around with adorable baby picture*
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  • From SarahTaylor on November 21, 2008
    A fitting ending, I loved it XD

    I was a bit 'nooooo, it can't end' when I read the bit about the last chapter at the top but all good things must come to an end and that was beautiful. Thank you for sharing that with us and I look forward to Cost of a secret.
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  • From ANON - nyves on November 18, 2008
    Awww poor Roy, things were just starting to get good for him, or at least as good as things can get with a traumatized boyfriend, but at least then Ed knew he loved Roy. Please update soon!
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  • From SarahTaylor on November 15, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
    He's not allowed to forget, him and Roy were finally getting along XD
    You do like to leave us hanging and wanting more don't you?! ;)
    Looking forward to the next chapter.

    And I will keep an eye out for Cost of a secret next month. XD
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  • From ANON - nyves on November 06, 2008
    I just started reading this story and I already love it! Please update soon! I really want to now what happens next.
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  • From antilogicgirl on October 29, 2008
    It is a rare thing for me, but I sat down and read all 18 chapters to date, at once. After having done so, it is my great pleasure to congratulate you on a truly great piece of fanfiction. The story is intricate, engaging, heart-warming and tense. Very few grammatical errors were evident, which I'm sure you know is unusual in the genre. My favorite part about all of this is how wonderfully you've fit the characters to the situations in which they find themselves. Even though Roy seems to change very suddenly in the first two chapters, you make it very clear that the shock dulls a bit and he begins behaving more like himself, but a sort of softer and more vulnerable (or fuzzy and huggable, whichever you prefer) version of the Roy Mustang we love to hate. In short, hats off to you. Bookmarked, favorite, ten stars and a smiley face. Excellent work

    --A
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  • From SarahTaylor on October 27, 2008
    yay! I love this story, it took me a second to recognise the title but when it hit I couldn't get to the update fast enough.
    I can't wait to see what Anton and Wrath have planned for Ed.
    Looking forward to the next update.
    (Does this mean that Cost of a Secret is being updated too??)
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  • From nightfox39 on September 04, 2008
    this is good, i hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - radcat38 on August 23, 2008
    You know I kind of feel sorry for Anton...he was as trapped as a lot of others were in the reign of Dante and her creations. I do feel for him and hope there is a way out for him but he (like Envy) needs to let his jealousy and anger toward our boys and FMA crew go. Nice to see Wrath trying to do some good in this world. I feel for him too. And those poor boys down in the old city..there were just being boys...glad Wrath stepped in and helped. Glad that Ed and Roy are slowly making their way forward with each other. Nice to see Riza and Al finally admitting their feelings but willing to see what happens. Riza is right. They need to see what the future holds. There is a little mystery there. Al may have more in common with Winry...but who knows...have no clue who Winry or Riza would be paired with. And Havoc is finally luck in love...I hope. Olivier for Fuhrer (spelling?). Breda...about time a story has him taking a central role...he is underused as the other characters in Mustang's army...they are all such good guys and gals (not forgetting Deny, Ross, etc). Glad for the update but I know how real life interveres with the things we really want to do. And sorry for the typos etc that I did not correct. Glad that Ed is getting better and Izumi and Sig might a side appearance! Yeah!
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  • From Afrieal on August 14, 2008
    oh dear old sins are coming home to roost it seems... great update looking foreward to more sorry it's so brief just got back from out of state (and dial up hell) and i'm trying to catch up on 3 weeks worth of work as well as type up all the hand written notes for my stories

    affie (and rysh sort of )
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  • From radcat on June 19, 2008
    Chapter 16. I just keep feeling more and more sorry for Anton. I am glad that I was never in his position. Hoho is right....good thing Mustang found the boys instead of Dante. Too bad the FMA gang does not realize how much Anton helped them...his survival was involved in that too but he was smart enough to know what needed to be done and participate in it also. Too bad he did not want to testify on behalf of Ed and Roy...he could have been forgiven...maybe. He did not mean for Selim to get killed. No one did. Mustang and Riza did not see that one coming. Oliver as Fuhrer...cool. Glad Ed is starting to regain himself and good that he and Roy are finding each other. Peace between Pinako and Roy...good. A possible understanding between Riza and Al....??? Glad Breda gets a good role in this story...I think we take him for granted too much. I like to see him included more and in this story he gets to show off his brilliant mind. Someone for Jean...who is immune to Roy's charm. The story is progressing nicely.
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  • From radcat on June 01, 2008
    I finally caught up with the last 3-4 chapters. (I am suppose to be packing and moving!) I think your story is progressing nicely. I actually feel sorry for Anton...he created Gluttony...how sad. He really got the bad end of many deals. So did so many others. He really should not be trying to destroy Ed and Roy. But he would have animosity (spelling?) towards Ed because Ed's path diverged so much from Anton's even though they had done the same thing. Anton did not have a Mustang in his life. I like how all the characters are progessing. At least Ed is starting to understand where Al is coming from but there has been so much damage. Poor Roy...he really wanted to be the one for Ed. Roy himself had been sexually abused. I like how you interwine the flashbacks. Is Gluttony paying a visit to his brother?
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 25, 2008
    I like the way you've explained Gluttony, the anime tells us about how all the others came to be more or less but never explains gluttony.
    I don't know how you manage to concentrate on 2 stories at once but I'm glad you do. This chapter explained a few things for me but I still have lots more questions. Please update soon and answer them for me. XD
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