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By : TristaML
  • From ANON - Maggie on November 15, 2012
    Absolutely perfect ! Thank you so much ! I really appreciated your answer to my review. That's a pity I won't know how Horendans would deal with this princy scum but I'm really happy that Goku and Vegeta managed to connect at last. I will be checking your story from time to time. Once again - thank you.
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on November 15, 2012
    Omg! You were right..I love this chapter! I love the semi-reconnection of Goku and Vegeta...these two need to get their asses back together before I have an aneurysm! Lol, and the hot, steamy sex with Von and Gohan, well, it just makes the need for GokuXVegeta that much more intense! However, I realize that this is going to need some build-up, otherwise it will just be porn..hey, they deserve to have their apimic bond, too, right? Lol, just bite already...
    XD
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on November 14, 2012
    Fantastic update! I just love the Gohan/Von interaction. And very happy that Goku could reach Vegeta! Although, I would love to see what happened to Fronshir. Thanks again for the wonderful story!
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  • From Robyn on November 13, 2012
    Chapter 20 - I hope Vegeta can reach Goku and get out of that situation and back where he belongs! Poor Piccolo. *sighs* hind sight and all that. Von is a very lucky fellow. :)
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  • From ANON - Maggie on November 05, 2012
    I'm so glad that you're going to continue 'Gone'. I was checking this site for any update for a couple of weeks and finally there is : )!! Vegeta is my absolute favorite character from DBZ. I really hope that Goku will answer his calling for help. And I really hope that Vegeta will meet other Saiyans. Sorry for my awkward writing but I'm from Poland and I still have some issues with commenting on sites like this one. But I really apreciate your work. Please, keep going.
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on November 04, 2012
    Come on, Vegeta! Snap the hell out of your trance, and kick that bastards ass! And, if you can get Gokus help, then the more the merrier! Lol
    XD
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  • From Robyn on October 21, 2012
    Chapter 19 - YAY!! They finally got on with it! I'm glad Goku was there to run interferance. I wonder what Piccolo thinks of them having gone off planet.

    I hope Vegeta is able to break out of the MC. If not, then I hope he's able to contact Goku for help!
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on October 08, 2012
    Finally! Gohan got screwed...by the hot saiyan. :) I am quite eager to see what happens to Vegeta. Can't Goku tell what's happening to him? Maybe he has to slip completely. Still, he shouldn't have enough mind will to keep the bond between them blocked off, if he can't so much as move. Ah well. Guess we'll see.
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on October 08, 2012
    Omfk! Fronshir..such a dirty, conniving bastard...Goku need to get on the ball with finding Vegeta, and he, in turn, needs to fight off Fronshirs control and send out his own mental SOS to Goku...make it happen, lol!
    XD
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on October 07, 2012
    Finally!!! The tension between Gohan and Von was sot strong for so so SO long. And I like how Goku trusted Von with his son. I feel a little sorry for Videl/Pan and how she found out. I still don't get why Gohan flew to CC if that is where his wife was. Perhaps he was just so far gone with his desires, he really didn't think things through. Thanks for the update!!
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  • From Kirtha on October 01, 2012
    I love the story, cannot wait for updates. As for the part about King kai's planet, Yes Goku and IT to it. He did it in the Cell Saga when Cell was going to blow himself up. He IT himself and Cell to king kai's planet. Which he didn't have his halo at that time.
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  • From Robyn on September 30, 2012
    I'm not surprised Piccolo was there to interfer if necessary. Poor Piccolo - to want to help in ways he's not equipped to! :(

    Yeah, Von is very outclassed as far as Gohan is concerned. Gohan is certainly going to have to let somethings happen, because Von isn't in a position he can make them happen.

    And of course, I'd really like to know what Goku and Gohan were doing for a week. :P

    I hope Vegeta figures out what his shipmate is doing to his thoughts in time!
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on September 30, 2012
    I'm so happy to see that Vegeta is fighting off the possession. Lol, that sneaky bastard is in for a surprise when Vegeta realizes what he's up too. I certainly hope the you make it a viscous and bloody end for him (I am talking about Vegetas guest..for some reason I can't remember his name...lol)
    Great chapter btw! Hurry up and mate Gohan and Von, already! There is a screaming lack of sex here..lol. What can I say? If I didn't like the way that you spell things out, I wouldn't be so damn addicted to begin with! And, I SO am!
    Update again, soon please!
    XD
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on September 28, 2012
    -growls- damn that Dunduil! Dumbduil is more like it...hehe, i made a funny. We're never gonna get a lemon at this rate...i need a lemon like i need air. I need my fix! >< And quit torturing Gohan. Just...someone fuck him already. And when are Vegeta and Fronshir gonna do it? Cuz that's just inevitable. Ugh! So many chances and no one's either taking it or screwing it up. Idiots! And Von sounds hot, so he has to get laid. -sighs- Lemon. Next chapter. Do it. -_-
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on September 28, 2012
    Thank you for the great update! I love this story so much - one of my favorites!
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