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By : TristaML
  • From Robyn on September 04, 2012
    Ack! NO! Fronshir - I knew Vegeta shouldn't trust him!!!!! But I also understand now why he did.

    So, Goku has plans and that includes using the other Saiyans to find Vegeta in some way. And Piccolo got to show off a little without having to tear someone's head off. But there was certainly a lot of missing Gohan in this chapter. *pouts*

    Now I want to read chater 18!
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  • From Robyn on September 04, 2012
    Chapter 16 - yum! Loving all the limes with the high emotions mixed in. You're writing is getting the message across well!

    Von and Gohan - so close! I hope Gohan manages to get Von alone, and it doesn't turn out to be a free-for-all. And yes, I did notice the very short mention of G/Gh. Tempting! Ah - Piccolo i going to be jealous. And I'm wondering how Gohan is going to break this all to Videl, because there is no way Videl is going to be enough for him when the full cycle hits him.

    I loved the way Vegeta's thoughts finally circled around and focused on Goku. Fronshir picked a good moment to get an eyeful!

    Hopefully I can get to chapter 17 tomrrow.
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  • From ANON - Iarnsaxa on September 03, 2012
    I found this story two days ago and read it in two "yaoi power sessions". I'm really enjoying it and can't wait to see how it develops. I'm always wary of stories in which new Saiyajin come to Earth, but you've given these new characters believable pasts and interesting "baggage" :-) The only constructive criticism I can offer concerns the typing errors, which aren't a deal breaker but they can/do distract from the flow of the text, and when you change tense from past to present and back in-text. You've got another fan!
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  • From ANON - Gingy on September 01, 2012
    I am intrested in the relationship between Trunks and Gohan, there seems to be a bit there about it but not much to think alot about it. Great story I love it.
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on September 01, 2012
    I knew it. O.o I knew Fronshir was up to something. Was he the one that that one Saiyan was talking to when they landed? Or...was that someone else? Oh and...can't Goku go to King Kai so he can have a peek at what the planet looks like so he can IT there? I don't know if you've thought of that already or you just want a different way of going about it. Maybe you're planning on having Vegeta get captured and then Goku has to save him? Perhaps there will be a break in the link and Goku will be able sense him? Maybe he'll be able to when Fronshir gets Vegeta into the mind fields? Eh, just wondering what's gonna happen.
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on August 31, 2012
    No! Just, no, no, no! Vegeta needs to realize what is happening, and snap Fronshirs goddamned neck! Sonovabitch! Oooh, that just makes me feel all nasty..and, why in hell, does Vegeta have to be a goddamned damsel-in-distress, anyway? Lol, I hope like hell that this doesn't get any messier before it starts getting better, or I'll have a nervous breakdown!
    Lol
    XD
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  • From ANON - blaze on August 26, 2012
    I love this story, I just found it and I can't stop reading it. I can't wait to find out what going to happend with Gohan.
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on August 25, 2012
    ugh, you're such a tease >.> it's agonizing enough that Vegeta's away and everyone's going crazy without him and he's going crazy without them...not to mention ur putting in teasers in the situations that everyone's been expecting...but that's why ur probably doing it huh? 'Cuz everyone's expecting them. :p well, i guess the only question is, will he go back? or is there going to be a sequel called 'Back?' *sighs* i'd be more than happy to volunteer to 'help' Gohan through Horunta. :) The only thing is, I don't think I'll be able to survive it lol. Carry on, dear. This story went from interesting to a must read. Now, excuse me while I add it to my recommended stories.
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  • From Robyn on August 23, 2012
    So much UST between Gohan and Von! The interuptions must stop! :P j/k That was an interesting conversation between Goku and the new comer. I really think that guy wanted to pick fight just to see what Goku was capable of. Makes me wonder what a normal saiyan's power level is, because it doesn't seem that much stronger than Krillan.

    I can't believe Vegeta is letting his gaurd down that much around Fronshir.
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  • From Robyn on August 22, 2012
    I was without internet for a bit. Sorry. Chapter 14 -

    Not too sure how I feel about Fronshir interest in Vegeta. I'm wondering what uses Vegeta will put his telepathy to. :D

    I know I don't like Dunduil. I do want to know more of the past between him and Von. I'd like to see more of Piccolo's thoughts on the interaction he sees between Gohan and Von. I caught that bit about Gohan leaning too close to Goku. Interesting. I'll get to chapter 15 in the next couple of days!
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on August 14, 2012
    The tension between Gohan and Von is so frustrating and wonderful at the same time. I love it!
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  • From Robyn on August 04, 2012
    After this chapter, Fronshir isn't seeming like such a bad guy. It's going to take them 8 months to get to his home planet?

    I'm sort of glad Goku stopped Bulma from going out to spy on the saiyans. I do wonder why he's so worried about it though.
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on August 01, 2012
    Please, please say that Vegeta is coming back..SOON..I can't hardly
    stand it, you little brat, you..lol, jk(?)
    XD
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  • From ANON - animeslave18 on August 01, 2012
    Reading this is like reading about a really good movie. :) Except they're no pictures. 8(
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  • From Robyn on July 22, 2012
    That was a lot of information to pack into a chapter! I totally understand how Goku feels. Not certain what it all pertains to, but there is certainly a lot to think about!

    I'm starting to like Von, if only for Gohan's sake. Stupid phone!!!!
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