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By : TristaML
  • From Robyn on October 15, 2011
    Okay - finished chapter 2!

    One of the many great things about DBZ is the transformation factor. It makes for so many possibilities! :P

    Now to see if Vegeta's plans actually take place, or if Goku manages to take things to places Vegeta never dreamed of.
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  • From Robyn on October 14, 2011
    I just noticed the update! Now I have two chapters to catch up on. I'm at the very beginning of chapter 2 and my reading time is down to minimum, so it may take me a bit to catch up.

    I'm excited about this update!
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  • From Zofo on October 13, 2011
    Ahhh drat Gohan interrupted them, now I have to wait for the next chapter, or maybe more! Poor Goku not really knowing what's going on but typically he's still happy-go-lucky with it :)
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  • From ANON - noon on October 10, 2011
    No lemon but I liked the update for the great look into Gohan's thoughts and confusing reactions to Vegeta as a Saiyan. I admit when he first showed up and you described his face as 'angelic' and that he was pouting I thought this was going to be one of the stories where Gohan is whiny, oblivious to anything Saiyan, and generally just in the way and annoying. I really loved the part where Gohan was thinking about how hard he tries to hide how different he is from his mother, as his father does, and how it is irritating to see Vegeta so unapologetic and unafraid to act as himself in comparison, though, and now I'm glad Gohan is in the story. So glad you brought up that canon scene on Namek that was so thrillingly evil as Vegeta softly spoke to Gohan and touched his face, before kneeing him in the stomach and promising to kill his father and laughing as he flew off-but still leaving Gohan alive.

    The reveal about how much Goku thought of Vegeta was very nice, and I never would have expected Goku to be so affected that he couldn't stand to see the prince sometimes when he didn't know how to talk to him or connect with him. A little curious if the sub/dom relationship is a rigid, important thing in this story or if it can switch between them or even if Goku is so odd he lets the general expectations of those roles be redefined. A little surprised Vegeta didn't have an obvious and absolute opinion on which role he wanted, but maybe his mind was fuzzed by hormones, too.

    I'm really looking forward to seeing this continue and some more about the transformation and instincts that both Goku and Gohan are still in the dark about. Thanks for updating!
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  • From Zofo on August 17, 2011
    Oooo a new story from you, wonderful :)

    I'm loving the new form, I picture it similar to SS4 but with not so much fur. Vegeta is being such a tease but I wonder if he can really control Goku.
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  • From ANON - Dinamicus on August 14, 2011
    I'm happy to read you again.
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  • From mjmusiclover on August 10, 2011
    wow, this is really awesome :D:D, it's incredible stuff. looking forward for reading more
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  • From MutantPoptart on August 07, 2011
    I'm enjoy this story very much. The characters are written well and their interactions are very interesting. Super Sexy Read! Thank you for writing this fascinating story :)
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  • From ANON - Dragon] on August 06, 2011
    Very good start!! Looking forward to this story it sounds great update soon.
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  • From Robyn on August 06, 2011
    Yum. Yes, that was a good way to start the morning! I can see where Goku is confused and frustrated. I'm glad to be reading this from Vegeta's perspective - at least I know a little more of what is going on! :P

    Interesting tidbit about Trunks wanting to be around Goku more and more....


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  • From Robyn on August 05, 2011
    YAY! I am sooooooo excited to see you'd started another story! I don't have time to read this chapter this evening, but I thought I would drop you a note to point out that AFF has changed their formatting and the < > HTML commands no longer do what they are supposed to. They show up, and there is no bolding, or italiziging.

    I know what I'm reading in the morning with my coffee! :D


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  • From ANON - Neko_Star on August 05, 2011
    Oh my, that was hot!! *fans self* Very nicely written, one on the best DBZ fics I've read in YEARS!! Very nicely done and I can't wait for more. ^___^
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  • From mjmusiclover on August 05, 2011
    wow, this is really awesome :D:D, i love how you wrote this, it's really well written :D
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