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Reviews for A King With Chaos

By : CardDragonBall
  • From ANON - macha on October 15, 2004
    Well, I am glad that this was a happy ending and Kakarott and the babies are doing alright. Yeah, probably not the best idea to talk about examining a super sayian if he doesn't seem pleased with the idea.

    And they are going home. Of course, we know where that is headed.

    I hope you have more ideas up your sleeve. I do understand that you are busy though.
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on October 15, 2004
    That was a great ending!!!

    Gohan was hilarious. Goten and Vegeta operating...LOL

    And Kakarott watching himself get a cesarian. ROFL

    Loved it all.

    I havn't forgotten about Presta either. *Grin*

    ~Webtester01~
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  • From ANON - Lenora on September 28, 2004
    Me neither. i came in like halfway through the Buu saga and i have no clue how old he was!!!! ah well, i'll just minipulate the time for my own ends. *evil chuckle* i can't wait for more!!! more!!! *grabs Trunks and runs off with him*
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  • From ANON - macha on September 27, 2004
    Well, Kaki not wanting to go through the process does explain it. It was kind of cute the way he wanted to see the first born, but I think he forgot he still had a second one on the way. Going well so far. *crosses fingers*

    I like what Red eventually told Presta, "Don't let anyone push you around," and admitting she might be a little prejudice about Gohan being a halfbreed. *shrugs* I hope Presta takes her advice. I also believe that Red had another good point, Gohan must have wanted her if he mated with her after already having a bonded mate. Of course, it could be part of the half-breed thing, and his insticts may have been led astray somewhere along the way. *shrugs again* Seems to be working out though.

    I went to look at the shirts. WAY COOL. But I don't wear white. Still thinking about getting the "It's not a Bananna in my pocket," one though. *thinks about all the raised eye brows at work* LMAO, what makes it even funnier, is that it would so totally NOT apply. hehe
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on September 27, 2004

    Red cenly nly had some good advice for Presta.


    Was Gohan always on the bottom in regards to him and Caradoc?


    Also 'Geta is right; Goten usually is the reason why someone got pregnant. LOL


     


    Also I'm working on chapter 15 as I type this review. It seems I'm on a roll this week, despite being sick. :-(


    Looking forward to more.


    ~Webtester01~


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  • From ANON - jaygoose on September 27, 2004
    Hurray. Things are finally settling back down in a comfortable pace. The usual chaos and drama. The babies are being born. Caradoc and Gohan are banging And I really liked the last thing Red said to Prethouthough. Made me smile.
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  • From ANON - Lenora on September 22, 2004
    It was chapter 13 not 14. and somehow i completely missed it. i went from 12 to 14. i don't know how i did it but i did. lol i'm sorry Card. i'm a bad reviewer. ooh guess what, i bought the History of Trunks dvd now i can watch 17 all i want. i love how sarcastic he is. and my best friend loves 18. hmm...you probably know this. how old was Goten when the whole Buu thing came up? and how old was he when he first went Super Saiyan??? i know Trunks went Super Saiyan first but i need to know how old Goten was.
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  • From ANON - Lenora on September 20, 2004
    did i miss something somewhere along the way? i don't remember reading gohan bite presta...or am i just a complete dunce??? please help!!!
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  • From ANON - macha on September 18, 2004
    Okay, so I re DON DON"T understand why Kaki wouldn't want to have the babies. I would want them OUT.... NOW. Maybe he knows thee goe going to be a handful when they aren't so nicely contained any more?

    As for Presta, yeah, I can imagine her comment did give Red pause. I have forgotten, has Red met Gohan? She might change her oppinions of half breeds if she gets to see the power they can posses. *shrugs*

    AAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, T-shirts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cool. hehe, have a catalog in the making?
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on September 18, 2004
    It's the twins birthday! *blows whistle*

    I am looking forward to more of this wonderful plot.

    btw ch 14 in progress.

    ~Webtester01~
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  • From ANON - Jessjess on September 04, 2004
    So, I just spent the last two days reading EVERYTHING connected with this story and I must say I really like what you write, but the whole Vegeta/Kakarot Vegeta/Goten depressed and having bad sex thing kinda sucks. I loved all of the other stories and will continue to read because basically I love your stories, but I hope it gets better soon. Then again it could be that it's 3:22am and I'm grumpy. Ah ha! Hope springs eternal! Gomen, I really do love you. *puppy eyes with quivering lips*
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  • From ANON - macha on September 02, 2004
    Oh, the sayian threesom was interesting, even if it was from Cardoc's biest point of view. Yeah, I can imagine that the reason there aren't more mulitipul matings is because of possible killings. It's just lucky that Presta seemed okay with it, and Cardoc doesn't have the power to actually kill either one of them for it. hehe, Like the t-shirts.

    King Vegeta's POV on the sex thing was cute. Now he gets to go back to the way he likes it, MMmmmmmmmmmm. (Thinking of taking a similar trip down to dirty-thought-ville)

    I bet Kaki looked like this O.O when he heard he was going to give a mulitipul birth. Please try to reassure him that only having two is so much easier than having three, especially the first time.

    I knew the hockey gear would come in handy. hehe
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  • From ANON - Webtester01 on September 02, 2004
    Again, I like the T-Shirts.
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  • From ANON - macha on August 30, 2004
    I think the thing that I am MOST happy with in this chapter is that Kaki finally seems to like wha bei being done with/to his body. Sex is so much better when you are having a good time.

    Yes, Gatta put it correctly when he discribed what he would do if he found someone with his brother in a similar situation. I am kind of glad lil' Geta didn't act out on his voiced oppinion.

    Well, I had no idea that Presta was going to jump Cardoc's bones. NONE. I thought O.O . I was almost ashamed of Gohan until he finally acted out. Sheesh, I don't know any other sayian who would let their mate be fucked infront of them. It does seem like it is going to be an interesting evening for those three.

    *gets out popcorn and wears hockey gear incase it gets rough* hehe
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  • From ANON - Dr. Yaoi on August 30, 2004
    This last chapter was well wri. I . I have a question. Does gohan like carodac (sp?) or presta more. I mean that whole threesome is weird. *starts to laugh hysterically* sorry. I just imagined vegeta in an apron with a rolling pin in his hand yelling at the twins for coming home late. Haha! But really I can't wait until you update. Till' then.
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