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By : TristaML
  • From ANON - Nancy103 on January 25, 2013
    Another fantastic chapter! The interaction between Von and Vegeta is great! And then having Gohan listen in…..yes!! Your story is definitely on the top of my list for fanfics. I love the details, the plot, the exposition….everything is so well thought out. I am sorry to hear you might not be writing for awhile but I understand that life is life and we have to move on with it. If you do write, I will definitely read ;-) Looking forward to the final chapters! Thanks for the updates!!
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  • From ANON - Mambasa on January 19, 2013
    This is close to the end things are now starting to get good. Do videl have a sexual relationship with Von if not she is getting the raw end of the deal.
    So Trunks gave up on his crush on Gohan a little part of me wanted to see that but maybe there's hope now for Goten. Why do it seems now that they
    love there mates more than their wives. Is Goku going to help Goten out also. I can't wait to read more from you.


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  • From ANON - Maggie on January 11, 2013
    Hello there! Thank you once again for magnificent chapter. Finally they're at home ! What a pity that you're story is coming to an end. I hope to read more your work in the future.Do you plan to reveal the true about what happened to Vegeta with Fronshir ? Because I really hope so. A little more drama would be interesting "Grand Finale" ; )
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on January 11, 2013
    Honestly, other than the SCREAMING lack of ANY sex (lol), it was another really great chapter. I'm so happy that Vegeta is getting the opportunity to rule his people as their king! He so deserves to be happy, and having his legacy restored just may do the trick, besides now being mated to Goku..being king is just an added, extra bonus, lol!
    XD
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on January 01, 2013
    Yay! Vegeta is back and he is acting like a King already. Happy New Year!
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on January 01, 2013
    Thank you for the random, hot Saiyan sex! Happy New Year!!!!
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on December 17, 2012
    Omg! This. Just, omg...this chapter was FANTASTIC!! It's just, well, eeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    Worth the wait? You're damned right! So much loving, lusty, juicy sex..mmmm, mmmm, mmmm..daaayum, lol.
    Now, for Von to rip Dunduils throat out, since Vegeta isn't here to do it, would be very fitting, indeed...pwease?!
    This has been a very exciting, and VERY much appreciated early Christmas gift, and I thank you, so very much..
    Until your next update, my friend..may YOUR holidays be as delicious as you've made mine!
    XD
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  • From ANON - Nancy103 on December 17, 2012
    I love love LOVED this chapter! The interactions of even the side characters were great. Thanks for the early Christmas gift!
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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on December 12, 2012
    Omk...I'm so excited! Eeeeeeeeeeeeee! Let the games begin!
    I am anxious over whatever evil Dunduil is planning to use Bulma for...or, is it Trunks that will suffer from the damage? Well, whatever he's planning, I'm certain that he will not be successful in his efforts. No matter what, or who, it involves...Vegeta will make him pay. Or, Goku..and, it WILL be painful, lol.
    Haha, you were right..I LOVE this chapter! Thank you!
    XD
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  • From ANON - Nancy 103 on December 11, 2012
    What a cliff hanger!!! What will their first meeting in years be like? Will there be shouting? Love? Tears? AH!!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Maggie on December 11, 2012
    OMG!!! Goku is going to see Vegeta again!! I have only one thing to say. Please, write faster !! I need to know what will happen!


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  • From Robyn on December 08, 2012
    Chapter 22

    I'm glad Piccolo and Gohan had their talk, although I'm not certain it resolved everything. At least they are on talking terms. I was curious as to how you were going to handle Gohan and Videl, and I see that isn't all the way worked out either, but it went differently than I thought it was going to.

    I wish Goku had taken the time to talk to Von about the bite he gave to the other sayian. I'm glad Von is going to double check to make sure Goku is the one that bit him.

    Vegeta's introspection makes me uncomfortable, but then, I guess he's got a lot to think about and isn't anywhere near Earth. A year and 1/2 to get back? O.o


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  • From Secretsaiyancrush on November 29, 2012
    Vegeta needs to put the pedal-to-the-metal..NOW! Ewwww, just thinking about Fronshir 'taking' Vegeta makes me ill.. and, Kami only knows what that damned Dunduil is up to, still..
    Goku should just finish him off, before he figured out how to fuck with Vegeta, as well...
    Daaayum, I just love this...it tingles me, lol
    XD
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  • From ANON - Maggie on November 28, 2012
    Great chapter, as always. Interesting, so Fronsir didn't take his chance to get laid with Vegeta. I would thought that he's going to use the oportunity like this one. Vegeta is returning, yeah ! Thank you, I will stay tuned so take your time and write, write, WHRITE.
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  • From Robyn on November 23, 2012
    Chapter 21 - Yay! Goku finally reached Vegeta and Vegeta broke free!!! :D I'm glad Piccolo was there to pick up Goku afterwards, and I'm glad Vegeta decided to return, rather than go further away.

    Von and Gohan certainly are good together!
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